I just goin to respond to your comment... you are absolutely RIGHT! And the chapter was awesom

I'm really enjoying this story so far. You're a really good writer, and I honestly can't think of much to critique. If I think of anything, I'll be sure to message you. So far, I'm enjoying the story, and I love the flashbacks of Nat in the Red Room. I hope we see more in the Black Widow film. I'm quite loving all the scenes between Nat and Steve. And I thought it was cute when Nat called Wanda and Sam kids. Lol Her and Steve are like their "parents" in a way. Lol

Keep going I really like this story I know you updated a long time ago but keep going you've got something great going on with this story

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update please! its been over a year!

Just found this fic and love it hope you will continue

This was so good! Especially this last chapter with Natasha’s childhood. You wrote that very well. Sad that it doesn’t seem to do getting finished

Really good chapter! Love the story so far

Loved it and I can't wait for the continuation

I love this exciting story, as it sticks to both Steve and Nat’s characters, and I give it 5 stars! But please, please update! I love suspense and remaking the end in my head, but as much as I love that, I (and I’m sure more) am really hoping to be able to finish it the way it was meant to be finished:P

I’m really enjoying this ! Thank you

I really how you continue!

I like the fic but it is extremely chaotic with no sense of continuity. If you were to include a line letting the reader know when/where each part was taking place it would help immensely instead of leaving us to flounder for half a chapter and figure it out.

I liked it. You really should use line breaks to set apart the scenes. It was difficult to know when there was a time-skip or a flashback.

Natasha off as a selfish bitch in this story