I like how they secretly dating, flirting eachother while the sister was gone. I like it! My favourite OTP are Prohyas and Simone.

pls continue pls

Please fix spacing, grammar and spelling

I like this! It reminds me a bit of another fanfiction someone else is doing for the show right now. My only question is, I figured Vambre knew that Prohyas and Simone were more like a couple by now, so she wouldn't have a problem with her being there, but that's just me.

My Advice: Try not to get too serious or too jokey. Try to have a balance between the two. And don't be hesitant to develop the characters a bit