this is really good and sweet! i hope it gets updated (maybe) soon!

I've really enjoyed reading this fic! Hermione and Fred's developing relationship feels natural to me. But ahhh, I do wish they would have kissed! I do hope you'll continue their story :D

Awwww! And yay! I hope college goes well for you :-)

i hope fred regrets and apologize to heromione!

Love it! Good amount of drama! Can't wait to read more!

You finally update...just to make me sadder. Dang. Anyway great chapter...i guess. Can they like each other back now?

Pleaseeeee update soon

I really liked this chapter. I loved how Fred manipulated Charlie's love for dragons by having him tell Teddy about them in order for Fred to get alone time with Hermione.

I think Ginny suspects something, what I'm uncertain. I liked how Fred returned to the Burrow for the party to see Hermione. To answer a question from an author's note from a prior chapter: I would like to read a chapter from Hermione's POV.

Yay! I loved this chapter. I really liked how Ron wasn't too far off the mark with his secret boyfriend speculation. The ending of this chapter was sweet and hopeful.

I absolutely adored this chapter. Poor Fred, it never fails, someone inevitably interrupts them.

I really liked this chapter. George cracked me up. Also, the part where Fred noticed the pie being cut with a fork tickledy funny bone. My mother absolutely loathed it when someone cut a pie or cake with anything other than a knife. I like the character interaction between Hermione and Fred. I like how he is getting up earlier and earlier in order to try to spend more time with her.

My review for the last chapter was sent before I finished it. I'll use this space for reviewing both chapter one and two.

Chapter one: I thought the portkey bookmark was an unique and wonderful gift idea. I like the story premise and thought the chapter well written.

Chapter two: Poor Fred! I can understand why she thought he was pulling her leg when he made his declaration. Saved by the Molly, they were.

The portkey bookmark was an unique

Ohhhhhhh Hermione; just grab him and don’t let go! This is a lovely slow burn story and I’m looking forward to more :-)

oh please don't stop there. I would love to read more! This is fantastic!