First chapter was bad, it was just canon with insignificant extra characters. The second was much more interesting as I've seen the whole "I stopped taking the pill and now we're pregnant" play out in real life. But then you wimped out and no consquences happened.

I think it would have been a more poignant story if Astoria had died and Harry hooked up with Fleur/Daphne/Luna or Harry had died and Astoria had to deal with it. In the end of your story everyone gets a reward for her betrayal.

Crazy twist lol

I am confused. She says she isn't one of the untrustyworthy slytherins and whatnot, but she also went on a date with Malfoy. Anyone who is interested in Malfoy in that way cannot have trustworthy ideals or good intentions right? Why would you trust someone whose stance in life pretty much opposes yours in every way? (Luna is bullies and draco is most definitely a bully, therefore those who hang out with, support, or are romantically interested in him are likely to be the same)

Since Daphne is older, would the curse affect her as any heirs come from the older sibling if neither are Male? Also, Astoria can hardly be angry at Harry after what she already did...
Good story though. I enjoyed it a lot for the most part!

Please put bashing in your story. Some of us don't care to read that nonsense.

I am glad they were both able to survive that. True that Astoria should have discussed this with Harry first. I liked the ending their. Secretly, I think Harry will enjoy his 'punishment' LOL

I do like Astoria. I had a feeling Malfoy had something to do with it when Astoria initially said no to Harry. I was shocked Harry Actually killed Malfoy. Only way out of the contract… Yikes and it is a good thing Astoria got out of that contract. Very interesting chapter.

Great little story. Really enjoyed it!