I love it! The way you dissected the possibilities of their relationship, their individuality, how they can still work together even though they're so different. Owen finally giving up on her unwillingness to change or yield to his wishes is something that is so sad and yet, he gets it. And she gets why he cant stay...they still love each other despite their differences. Your characterization of them and other characters is spot-on. Thank you so much for this one shot!

Lovely to read. Simply wonderful how you managed to include 3 years in such a ‘short’ FanFiction. It was a pleasure to read you

Excellent 'Jurassic Park' one-shot! Loved your depiction of their pre 'JW' friendship and their pre 'JW:FK' failed relationship. Really in character. Glad the latest movie brought them back together, and that they'll make things work this time, especially now they've got Maisie as well.

Great one-shot! Enjoyed reading it!

Wow. This was great! You’ve covered a long period of time with (relatively) few words, and it not only makes perfect sense but is heartbreakingly real. I really love the characterization of their pre-JW friendship, adding to the tragedy of their pre-FK break-up. I don’t tend to agree with the idea of hooks-ups after Owen’s driving off in the RV/van, but I bought it inside this “universe” you created. Your depiction is very close to my own head canon (I have an ever-enlarging file of angsty ideas about their pre-FK break-up that will either end up never seeing the light of day or become...something), so I really connected. Very glad to find another kindred soul in the Clawen-writing community. I look forward to more from you.