HHAHHAHAHHAHA I think they are going to be good frenemies XD Enjoyed it!

I loved this soooooo much

This was really cool! I liked it being from flash’s perspective (in focus not in first person writing of course) and it was so well written! Super fun and I like the idea of a flash redemption. I also love any story with protective Steve Rogers is that was good too. Loved this!
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Yessir!

I love this? Thank you so much for sharing it with us

That was an interesting story from Flash's perspective.

Didn't really find out why the shooter was there, but he must've been really unlucky. If he had chose any other school, he would't have had to suffer the wrath of Iron Man's suit.

Amazing story! It goes to show that hatred doesn't get you anywhere. I think this story captures spider man's personality perfectly.

This was a wild ride! I am pleasantly surprised that I enjoyed Flash's perspective on this (Steve subtly and indirectly threatening him was absolutely stellar!). I mean, I despise Flash as a character because I've known many Flashes while I was a kid, so his meanness hits a bit close to home, but I really did like this story. Will Flash and Peter be friends? Not likely, but at least Flash got a metaphorical slap in the face, so he might not be as much of a jerk later.

Thank you for writing! :D

PS. I don't want to take up a review by pointing out grammar errors, so I'm going to PM you about what I noticed.

Ay this is really good. I can see Peter actually doing this. As much as he doesn't like Flash, he doesn't want anything to happen to him. Heck, he goes out of his way to make sure most criminals don't get too hurt. This was really well written! Great job!

Great story! I think I’m really starting to fall in love with this school theme you’ve got going on! Keep up the good work!

WOW! So awesome!

wow...didn't see Peter taking a bullet for Flash but this was good

great job

Ok I just gotta say I'm impressed, I always have such a hard time getting the characters into whatever situation I want them and explaining myself well, but you nailed it. I could see the whole getting Flash to the compound playing out like that, and everyone was kept in character so well. Love it.

I like the idea of the mini series! I think you should do it! This story was really good! So was 'Listen! Do you smell something?'! And I'm about to go check out more stories and I would definitely read a mini series if you did one!

Absolutely loved this! Definitely needs a sequel ;) Not to pressure you or anything...hehe
But seriously, I thought all of the character interactions were really well done - especially between Peter and Flash. The bullying bit at the beginning seemed pretty realistic (trust me, I know hahaha) without being over the top or melodramatic... and your dialogue all seemed to flow super nicely without feeling rushed :)
If you ever feel like doing a sequel I'll definitely be here for it! Thanks for sharing :D