It's good to know that you're back on this story.

Anyway, good chapter as usual. Lori's parts weren't all that interesting, but the ones that focused on the other two major characters of the chapter were. Hey, at least we're getting back with Sam and Pel. Getting on with Lincoln's storyline was also a good decision here. Of course, the previous chapter was a precursor for something bigger, and this one was correct in what it did.

I did notice some minor spelling error, prolly some grammatical errors, too. But I wouldn't waste much of my breath on them.

Lincoln is the rightful King of England?
I can't wait to see bis coronation!

Hmmmm...
Lori is getting better, I like that!

Ans merry Christmas to you as well!

I'm trying to get Gintama out of my head. I'm trying.

But let's jump onto the chapter, one week later.

I'm pretty sure Lori's gonna add fuel to the fire here. Or blow hydrogen into it, because it's inevitable something is going to blow up now that Lynn's got what she wanted. Also, this Lizzy is really going to be Lincoln's downfall here. That much is obvious, but eating memories?

And on the more serious part of it early on, that was a great way to signify the changes Lori is seeing with herself.

Okay, let me just get this out of the way first, Kess is a bit too edgy. I mean sure, with what he had to go through it's justified, but after thinking about it, the premise around him kinda feels overdone. Not in the sense that it's overused, rather, in a way that makes it feel overplayed. Just me, though.

Overall, this chapter was okay. I may not be able to say as much as I used to, but maybe there'll be a time when I can finally do so again. Until then, I'll either stay quiet or give a little feedback on things.

Alright, alright, off to a good start.

Kurutta is being a very shady dude now, more so than before. I believe you’re setting him up for something much much bigger? I mean that much would be obvious, since he’s also still the info gatherer for whatever it is he work for.

Yeah, that won’t be uber suspicious, suddenly getting a new bike like that. But man oh man if doesn’t bring me back to when my boy Godai first got his bike.

Suspicions seem to be the main theme of the first scene here, and you did that pretty well.

I really feel bad for Lisa on this one. She's still a kid for goodness sake.

Okay, 17 chapters in, and we finally see Lori make up her mind about her stand on things, that's great. But then again, it's still only on whether she truly wants to fight or not... we haven't gotten that much further yet.

Well, guess it's true what they say about bees and the likes... if they die, they're taking us with them. I mean, not all of them are bees, but you get the point.

Overall, the chapter is nicely done. An aftermath chapter just one chapter after the last one, but who's complaining? With the ending, it's pretty easy to tell what's gonna go down next chapter. The set-up, of course. What? A battle chapter happening so quickly? You nuts? At least, I think that's what's going to happen. Anyway, that's all I have to say for now. Until the next chapter is out, I will be eagerly waiting.

Glad to see you updated! this is my favorite story!

Lori, the hero...
I like the Sound of that!

How about a chapter that explains how Lincoln and Lizzy met?

...Oy Blyat.

What the arse was that!? Goodness gracious, I should have probably read deeper into Lisa's words there.

The implications for should Jewel and Frenzy fight again is a terrifying thought. Here I was, too, thinking Lincoln might actually take a backseat in the story.

What a luck Lori has; escaping one rogue Common Fighter, then stumbling to another just a little past her recovery.

I didn't think you'd be able to up the stairs in such a short amount of time. But here I am, giving my thoughts on it.

So, Lincoln is the Enemy now...
THAT is something new, something unexpected yet fitting, I love it.

I bet Lincoln will get his hands on a sealed driver.

Feel better soon.

Oh... OH!? Goodness, well I hope you can make a complete recovery. That should be at the top of your priorities now. In any case, hope you'll get better, when you do.

Get well soon!

I am happy to hear that you are okay.

Hoho! Now this is an intriguing one.

Have to say, though, it seems many Sentai or Rider influenced stories here always have the cause of their problems to originate from who knows where and have affected many universes.

It's great how you handled Jundao here. Despite having hailed from a medieval styled world, his speech doesn't at all feel pretentious in use of big words or those that are considered old. I don't think there's much OC who is played as straight as he is. I mean sure, there might be other things about him. After all, he is clinging on what little memory is left of his old world, but it's not too heavily implied that there's more to him thus, he is as complete a character as Lori is.

Regarding the chapter, overall, nothing much has progressed other than the part with Lori and Jundao. But nevertheless, they were still fun to read.