Is there any chance that you will continue with this is good read and a great plot line., Please continue this

Needs a proof read and improved dialogue.

Good update.

The sith make an appearance

Nice work, keep it up.

Another good chapter.

Also the Batarian Hegemony still has the Alpha Relay.

Wow an update so soon! Thank you for this chapter! Really looking forward on the next one... Is that the Illusive Man? And he is a Sith? or more likely a dark jedi?... Interesting, very interesting indeed

2 things i dont like : a sith and the fact that GA use to many type of ships for the same role . In case of war this is a major weakness bc of spare parts requirment , crew training and production . On type of ships for each class is ideal . If a carrier has 3 type of fighters and 2 type of bombers plus shuttles and recon ships it is useless during a fight bc of different spare parts and other things he need to keep the ships operational .
And the sith almost made me abandon this story . Reapers and batarian clones are more then enough , sith are to much and the story it will transform in SW no ME .

Are you using legends or cannon continuity as that will make the power levels of force users rather different

Awesome stuff

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I am hoping slightly that's the end of the chapter is Palpatine. Seems fitting, but unlikely. Then again, he is a tough SOB, both in Pre Disney EU and post Disney EU.

Other than that, I have been enjoying the story so far. Though, I question using clones, why can't the GA use it to fill areas that would benefit them as a whole? I get to not use them to remove the jobs no one wants but to help them expand faster in terms of colony growth (speed it up so to speak) or help fill area that otherwise would take longer to fill, or to man ships that could be used to, similar to the Republic, beef up their army. Since they are still sentient, the problem would be easy to avoid as it wouldn't be that easy to infiltrate, like what the Emperor did.

Maybe you answered answered the question, and I missed. It I did, then sorry for wasting your time on that.

So, I'm assuming that the secret Sith order is taking the place of Cerberus this go around? I'm looking forwards to seeing what you end up doing with them because, knowing Sith, they'll probably be on the more 'galactic dominion' side of things than the 'go humanity' that canon Cerberus was.

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Evil force users really?

Hm start of cerberus od somethin similar?
Btw niece chapter

Keep it up :)