I loved your story a lot. Though I could never imagine John and Harold in love together, You led the thing with tact and sweetness.
I appreciated how you described the John amnesic and I even thought that John was pretending to be to confess his feelings and to know if Harold felt the same way for him. John is very touching and very sexy in your narration. Harold is forced to reveal his attraction and his love. John is a very powerful character and you magnified him emotionally. Really, I admire you for your style and your imagination.
I am writing my first fiction "The French Person of Interest" and I would like to have your opinion on the interest it can arouse.
In any case, I thank you for giving me these thrilling moments and full of emotions. Big kisses.

Awww, what a perfect happy ending!

What the fuck?! Lol.
I’m in love with this story. It feels so real.
Nice job in bringing back Control! Were she the threat? Hummm don’t know.
John is back. Awesome. I guess Harold will soon have to face his feeling. I can’t wait to read the next chapters.
Like I said in my last comment on the other website you posted in, I love the fact that you respected so much caracters. Thank you for this awesome fic! Hurry up to post the next chapter lol!

Control escaped! Woot! I’m glad she’s okay. Also glad John’s got his memories back!

God!
Great Cliffhanger!
I can't wait!

This is an interesting take on what might've happened after the finale. John doesn't remember most of his life and the Team is still in danger! I'm looking forward to reading how the rest of this situation plays out.

Ooohh, cliffhanger! Gah!

Another great chapter. Thanks for posting!

Really enjoying this story.

I’ve noticed a lot of people re-writing the ending, though offering closure, the Canon ending is a little too short and rushed, this Fic however provides is a really great work of writing and a more heartfelt ending! Keep up the good work! I’m a little new to the POI FanFic community but I know that Harold and John are perfectly written here, and I really like the ‘amnesia’ angle! It’s like a more human version of the Machine’s simulations, a chance to make things right again. Please continue :)

I like this sequel after the end of the show. John is alive and has lost his memory. His questions are based on his intuitions and touch on a private domain that the two friends are clarifying. You know how to keep the restraint of the characters and describe their moods. I can not wait to know what's next. Kisses of France.

I love this beginning!
Great idea!

I’m really enjoying this so far! Keep up the good work!

Awesome story!
Looking forward to reading more.

Excellent story!