I think to be honest you should just focus on improving this story especially since you have less time now.

I’ll be honest there are a lot of mistakes, but remember that writing is like making a blade, the first time you do it your just going with what feels right and chances are it won’t go all to well, but as you carry on your skills are refined and along the way there will be people to help you.
So here’s some advise.
1) don’t wake up with your character, do something unusual with the order in which the story flows to make it more interesting
2) You need to get on top of your grammar, it will get better over time but for now, if you need any help with grammar just PM and I’ll help you out all you can
3) In some places you have little to no description of the setting or people, remember the five senses and how you can use them to make different tones, but don’t go overboard on it

If you need any help I’m right here, and remember that this is just the start, so it really doesn’t matter if you make mistakes as long as you learn from them.
Peace
Xander

Pertemis please!

percy jackson

Pertemis? I'd like that

MKe as you wish for the pairing,as long it isn't an harem,i'm ok

This could be interesting

you seem to wright like me you have an idea and you work to get there but you don't really plan your chapters

pertemis?

sorry but no its too forced and freaking bad you should better htake tyour time tou actually bould a character even their personality so the stroy actually fows and becomes interesting if not nobody would want to keep reading

please be BoyxBoy there's not enough of them

1k that all I have to say just reach 1k and you'll be good

As of now, you word count is quite low, if you want your story to be half-decent, aim for a word count of 1,000 at bare minimum or a decent 2,000. Next you want to fix your, quite frankly, crap grammar "so let me guess you have to take me to your cocky ,arrogant, asshole you call a father."

There are several things wrong in this sentence, for a start 's' is meant to be capitalised.
"So let me guess you have to take me to your cocky ,arrogant, asshole you call a father."

There's meant to be a comma in front of 'guess'.
"So let me guess, you have to take me to your cocky ,arrogant, asshole you call a father."

The comma placement is wrong where it's around the word 'arrogant'.
"So let me guess, you have to take me to your cocky, arrogant, asshole you call a father."

And that's just a single sentence. Your story also lacks depth and detail, you give us almost nothing to work with and finally, don't make this some cliche Pertemis shit, try something original. No one wants to read another Guardian of the Hunt story, alright? If you can't do something original, then you just shouldn't try to make it big on this site or even bother.

So basically,this is pretty good for a start, but I would say slow it down a bit add some chapter development. One way is have percy 'relive' his memories while he is knocked out. This way, you can have a backstory as to how percy encounter Artemis or some other gods or titians. The last thing I can say is be careful not to rush the story, if you need time to review a chapter you have wrote,then take the time to look it over. Personally, I prefer quality over quantity in the term of chapters. Anyhow this is by far the longest review i have ever done so I'll leave it here lol
Peace