The amount of fluff and sweetness in this story is going to give me diabetes, I love it

I. Am. Totally loving this fic! Seriously, this is just super exciting to read! Kudos!

This chapter has been pretty good. But I would say the beginning was a tad but confusing. I couldn't tell if it was a run down of two whole days in sequential order or the start of one day with flash backs to another two days.

I have to admit I loved seeing protective jaune on the cafeteria with vindictive Neo.

Also that anaconda moment with Nora was down right awesome. great comedy over all in this chapter.

Wow! About What you said is actually true. If only that could've been happened in the actual show, just to see the relationship between jaune and neo, that could been work for the show, but instead RT decide to put neo to work for cinder as a partner for no god knows reason why, I'm definitely blamed RT a this one.

was that . . . . was that a Dragonrampa reference? if it was then six of her would be apocalyptic nightmares.

really good chapter though. like seeing it through the perspective of one of the sisters. made it a bit refreshing.

Sooooo you said after he took his white button up off, he put on one of romans black shirts on to go to the docks, but then he had his hoodie and armor on again at some point?

Always love to see this story updated

Hey, don't worry about chapter updates man. I didn't update my story for THREE MONTHS because I had Covid. All I can say is get better soon and look forward to next chapter.

P.S. Don't piss off your friend.

it was pretty freaking adorable
but wow is her crime bag scary as hell lols

HAHAHAHAHA! Oh boy. HAHAHAHAHA! What a great chapter, comedy 10/10, moving the story along 8/10, and Neo being Neo 100/10. More please!

its alao a reference to a bond villain

all of my yes

Can't wait to see where this is going.

Hands down my favorite pairing and the story fits the characters so well just de read the story for the second time , please do continue I’d loved to be able to read more

I like Jaune and Neo. I hope you try writing a Pyrhha Jaune sometime, after all the emotional trauma she gets in your fics she deserves a fic of her own to balance it out.