This is just beautifully well written. Well done! ️

I love this so much

Oooh...my goodness. This was almost a year ago. I'm so sad this was almost a year ago because it means nothing else is coming. I LOVE these two together, and this was such a perfect look at Lou and her feelings. I LOVE this. And for English not being your native language, you did amazing.

Amazing story. I love it

Lovee it

Awww, this is adorable! I need more Debbie and Lou stories! I love those two!

I loved this fanfic and I have to say... I had never read something this good. I mean, there are plenty great fanfictions here but this one of yours? It's one of the best I have ever read. Thank u so much, Im totally obsessed with this ship and I enjoyed so much reading you. Btw, English is not your first language? I wish I could write in English like you do

seriously...! um english isnt my first language too and you are way better than me. i never thought you werent a native shile i was reading this. i loved this. it was really romantic...and delicate...i think delicate is the right word for it. thank you so much for such an amazing fic. and i didnt ffind any tyypos or errors.

I read this a few days ago and I wanted to leave a review then and there, but I was on my phone and that is just tedious. But, I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this story. The characters are spot on, Lou's musings are genuine and more than easy to comprehend. I loved the pacing, the humor and just the honesty about it. This is by far the best thing I've read in a long while (and I read a lot). I would have loved to read more, so I hope you rewatch the movie again soon (maybe even today? xD) and inspiration for a sequel to this or ANTYTHING really, strikes once more. Even if not, this was absolutely fabulous. And as a non-native speaker myself, I'm even more in awe about what you did here. Thank you.

HOLY GOODNESS THIS IS SO GOOD ITS SO CITE AND AMAZING IM IN LOVE OMG THIS IS SO PERFECT AND ANGSTY AND UR DEPICTION OF UNREQUITED LOVE IS SO ACCURATE OMG ITS SO RAW AND EMTIONAL AND PERFECT. ITS WELL WRITTEN AND GRAMMATICALLY FLAWLESS TOO OMG. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL ITS MY NEW FAVOURITE THING

This is such a beautifully written story! And you can not tell that English is not your native language. Thank you for this post.

I never would have know English isn’t you first language because you did marvelously. It was a beautiful story and it left me wanting more, like the movie. In fact, it should have been added to the end of the movie.. great work