I absolutely love this story and look forward to an update. You are an amazing writer and I stayed up til 6:00 am reading this story. It is absolutely amazing and kept me on the edge of my seat.

This is a wonderful story! I hope everything is going well for you both in school and in life. If you are now in 9th grade, I wish you luck with your finals if you are taking them at your school, and I hope you plan to continue this story whenever you are ready. Thanks for writing it! :)

I used to believe that when you used a credit card it just meant you didn't have to pay for stuff, so I was like "Mom, why don't you just use the credit card so we can get everything we want?"

I love this story it is amazing thus far!

"Make sure to eat something today" you are so wholesome I could almost cry. I love these conversational author's notes and story-sharing. Super cool story too. Freakshow is a piece of horse sh*t and I sincerely wish him all the worst.

I am REALLY curious about what's going to happen next!
(No rush. I understand that Real Life comes first, and that Muses can be fickle.)

This is fantastic! I absolutely loved it! (No, I didn't read this instead of doing homework, I swear). I hope you're feeling better! Thank you for writing this and I eagerly await the next chapter!

DEE I'M HERE TO SCREAM PRAISES AT YOU!

I immediately love the idea for this story, and I'm such a sucker for DP/YJ fics. That's good shit. I feel so sorry for Danny here, and I like how you described how being controlled feels, and how the mist seems addictive and enticing.

Also Lydia? Being worried about Danny? So lovely. I've always loved Lydia as a character and it's nice to see she cares.

Lastly, Bruce being so struck by Danny being Dick's age. It would probably be so easy for Bruce to look at Danny and see Dick. is Batdad going to come to the rescue? I hope so

This is a really unique writing style and works really well with this story, I love the way you've done this and can't wait to see just where you go. Keep up the amazing writing!

Ooooh, breakdown. I like the line about up/down, left/right, right/wrong! It's very cool!
And "a painted neon colour."

Someone help the poor ghost boy!

Just found this, read it, love it! The way you write keeps everyone on their toes, so we don’t really know what to expect next. I can’t wait for more. Although, as much as I love the story, there are always several very noticeable grammatical errors, though they would be easy to fix.
The idea is different then most of the ones I’ve seen, and I can’t wait to see where you take it.
-Max

I'm super happy you're back and don't worry I doubt anybody is angry with you. Your health should always come first so if you ever feel the need to take another break feel free to do so. I want to read your stories but I want you to be healthy and happy before all that.

decent chap

Get well soon with the depression. I hope this review will cheer you up some. I really love your story it has the realistic struggles to it which I always love. The plot is at a perfect pace and it keeps me on the edge. I hope you update soon. See you later Korrie

Are you continuing the story or is it gonna be placed in a different titled book?

My band director had this kid playing sleigh bells, ok. Well the kid wasn’t doing well so the director made a reference to the movie Grease. He said: Have you ever heard of Hand Jibe(?idk)?
Well we all bust out laughing cause it sounded as if he asked the dude if he ever heard of Hand Job!