Reviews for P5: Fallen Hero
zerofire210 chapter 14 . 3/2
What a good fic if I love lying
Even being honest, I don't like Yu
be bad but from what I see you did not make it bad or at least as bad it just got more Mmm as I say it more directly in all aspects being honest I like how it is now even though it makes me sad about Margaret's
Already for asking she can be arranged with him?
Another question Was this Yu / Souji related to any of the research team? Example Naoto asked for the part of the first cap where they were about to kiss before ... well dojima suicide
What happened to Adachi? the one I remember was strong enough to fight with the shadows besides I didn't get him
what happened to him ? is dead ? or will you use it later in the fic?
About Minato I suppose you are going to use it? I say it by the label
not for something else
Can Souji / Yu use his other person? or since his friends died (I guess it seems half ambiguous as you left something that seems good to me as bad) and if they are that bad because they always liked me: c
apart from really Haras Souji vs Akira? I don't see the reason why they fight
and if they fought I would like to believe that Souji / Yu would win but taking into account that it seems that he does not have his Arcane seems doubtful
Akira should also use igor (fake) to make her stronger
What I could do is take advantage of Igor
to one who doesn't surprise me that Souji doesn't tell him mainly
for the hate he has for him and Filemon
anyway good cap and I look forward to the next
SkellZero chapter 14 . 1/22
Love this story, keep up the great work, I hope this gets updated soon
Dim95 chapter 14 . 7/20/2019
I'm waiting for you to update this story; It's amazing, just like The Fallen Messiah. I hope Yu continues with his revenge plan.

Also: I wish you could deepen the relationship between Yu and Kawakami: both form a beautiful couple

At least Akechi has psychological assistance with Margaret.

I hope to see an upcoming chapter the appearance of Izanami or Adachi.
Imperial warlord chapter 14 . 5/30/2019
Awesome story.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/29/2019
Wah PTSD much Seta Souji ?

You say that, but it seems like you already accepted it. Or that's the plot twist, it was in your heart all along !

A difficult question, being a Jojo viewer is one thing, but being a Jojo fan automaticaly makes you a great person of culture. So if you don't watch Jojo that either makes you a man of disgustingly poor tastes, or an unlucky soul. Rectify that.
Or you could read Jojo. But watching it is such a great visual and sound experience, that it's fine too.
Alexaxegx chapter 14 . 5/27/2019
Hey there!
ive been waiting for this, waiting at least a month for a new chapter its not a easy thing but im happy with the result!
I dont like akechi, i have my reasons but if you are gonna make a new fate to him then im willing to read it
The moment between Ann and Yu was so damn sweet, now i can definitely seeing them as a thing, and do they realize that they are 6 years apart? either way, i would like read more of it, and i wanted to ask, there will be persona 3 characters in this fic?
KingLuxion chapter 14 . 5/27/2019
What? Did we play the same Persona 5? Robin Hood alone had Megaton Raid, Eigaon, Kougaon, Mahamaon, Mamudoon, Debilitate, and Samarecarm.

And Loki had all of that and A LOT more.
I'mHalo chapter 14 . 5/27/2019
I've got some 'motivation' if you wish for it?
I'll get a certain character from a earlier fic and get him to tell everyone to read a certain chapter from the story he's from. ;) that's motivation.
blahblahblech chapter 14 . 5/27/2019
Wait, Akechi has his own velvet assistant!? Pigs really do fly. Hopefully this will help him a bit with his life.
Guest chapter 14 . 5/27/2019
That was pretty horrible and scary towards the end. Poor Souji.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2019
When will Souji go crazy and start beating people up? I want to see him use and abuse everything and everyone like Minato did in Fallen Messiah. That is what I signed up for.
ichinaruko chapter 13 . 5/10/2019
You should've add more sync in the velvet room...I mean come one fake Igor could've explain realistic bullshit about the bees and birds
Guest chapter 13 . 4/25/2019
Bbuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut ! It was meant to be red herring to hide the 'real' plot twist (trademark) !
Worst. Plot twist. Ever. And worst argument in favor of it. Ever. People feel so smart when they say it, you can smell their farts, for something so stupid.

Yu/Ann is never going to disapear accept it into your heart.

Holy shit, the keikaku was done super fast, like real fast. And super cool. Reminded me of a jojo quote. "A deal like that... is too good to be true... for a man like you." or 'You can't pay back what you owe... with money.'

"I, Yu Narukami, have a dream !"

The last bit is far from nice. TotallyIgor! being shitty.
Alexaxegx chapter 13 . 4/22/2019
I've been waiting for this update
I have a question, what does souji/yu to live?, he said he was a tutor, but that was a lie isn't?
I think in some part of the story things will be completly diffrent from the original plot, am i wrong?
i hope you keep updating this fic, is really a good one, and the part of Ann being jealous and wanting to be close to him was cute, keep it up
blahblahblech chapter 13 . 4/22/2019
No offense to Souji, but I were him, I would tell Akira that it’s okay to take advantage of the Velvet Room’s assistance of power while taking whatever they say with a grain of salt. Traumatized or not, self-reliance is just as important as teamwork.
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