It's nice that Rose is willing to look after Ali and that Mickey is willing to help the Doctor save Reinette. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.

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Another brilliant chapter, the Doctor is not going to be happy when he finds out what has happened to Ali. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.

very exciting ending

So the Doctor has gone round on the fireplace on his own. Wonder if he will do the same when he goes round the second time to check on her and what will happen if he does. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next part. Please update soon.

That was different, never read where a character got left at Sarah Jane's while the others went to the school before. Thankfully Ali managed to protect herself using the oil when the Krillitane attacked her. Poor K9, sacrificing himself, hopefully the Doctor can fix him. Looking forward to more.

So Rose has become rather protective of the Doctor's and Ali's relationship and doesn't want anyone interfering with it. So the Krilitanes tried to get Ali but she managed to protect herself although it came at a cost, causing her to black out. Something tells me the argument between the Doctor and Rose that usually happens outside the coffee shop at this point doesn't happen.

I'm glad Ali stood up for Mickey after he screamed, anyone would have done the same in that situation. Here's to hoping Sarah Jane and Rose don't bite each others heads off.

I was wondering if the no kissing for a week threat would pop up at some point. Also I'm assuming that you have either skipped Tooth and Claw or are going to do it at a different point in the story.

Seems Rose has a power of her own, to help Ali relax. I'm glad that the two of them are getting along now and look forward to reading more bonding moments between the two of them. Now Ali has started to gain control of her new powers.

I can see why you gave this chapter the title that you did, it certainly was a tense week for the three of them. Poor Ali, that really did a number on her head.

Poor Ali got put through a rotten head game there. Hopefully she managed to get herself out of it. It's funny that Ali said Rose had been traveling with the Doctor longer when technically it's the other way round as her and the ninth Doctor had a couple of adventures before they went back for Rose.