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O.O me likey the dom Yuugi always have always will. hehe they burned the casserole all right

Lol now that was nice. Yugi should be more dominate all the time. It would be a definite nice change. :)

Great story! I loved it. Great lemon. I am not a big fan of Seme!Yugi but I can understand why they would want to switch them sometimes. Ukes dont always want to stay as ukes for every sexual encounter XD but great one shot, sorry for babbling.

Ouch! Damn! Nice.

Very niccccee... That was an awsome one-shot! I could never figure out how to do character POVs. Im jealous, well keep up the good work!:)

Okay...totally imagining this with season 0 characters

first time reading YamixYugi [or YuGiOh in general]

mega super ultra chocolatey coated sexxxy goodness :D

YAY! I love ones where yami is the submissive one! :D thank you!

wow that was good oh soo good :O)

wow. xD yami's the better uke with any guy. haha.

I LOVE this fic.! Seriously! *Hearts*

Thank you SO much for posting it!

((And I totally agree with you about Anzu! xD))

I just have to say...HOLY FUCK! This is SO DAMN GOOD! I loved the details and the controlling Yugi XD I didn't take my eyes off the screen ;p is this a one shot or it got more chaps coming?

That was totaly awesome, i loved every sentance!

very good wifey very funny needs to be less offending i think

but a very good fanfic love you