Amazing story - loved it.

I absolutely adore this charming way of writing you have!
I’ve always been one for using line breaks for emphasis, and sometimes I worry that it’s just me and to other people it might not read right, but you use it so brilliantly - it’s almost as though I’m reading poetry, and I absolutely love that!
Your language is beautiful, the way you play around with words - the whole premise of this fic being ‘un-understandably’ was just brilliant.
I could go on and on about your use of alliteration, metaphors, blah blah - have you studied creative writing? The unique style you’ve developed in your writing is so striking - I’ve only read a few of your stories (trust me, I’m aptly making my way through them!) but I feel as though I could spot your style immediately now, and that is quite a talent to have.
Anyway, enough of my rambling. I just wanted to let you know that not only do I hugely enjoy the way you capture the subtleties of Riza and Roy’s characters, but I’m also captivated by the way you actually write too, and that’s something that very rarely happens to me with Fanfiction. (I’d absolutely read original fiction by you too because your style is so enjoyable to read.)

Thank you for sharing your marvellous stories!

SR x

It was really great!

yo, this is beautiful. This is exactly how I imagine Riza would come to feel a place was home: slowly, on accident, and rigidly legal. 3 it

BAGSF OMG man your writing style is so unique and so amazing! AND YES THEY DESERVE PEACE ASHGVD THEY DESERVE THE WORLD!
hell yeah im crying

oh this was simply wonderful! So very much in character - and while it was funny (made me laugh a couple of times) it did not neglect the internal struggles of both of them, making them perhaps even more real because of the light tone. Really fantastic work!

nice one! I love the repetition of certain phrases like the "probably not, no" one