good work. i hoped to read more chapter.

Good

This makes no sense to me at all. The fact that Naruto still likes Sakura after the personality change makes absolutely ZERO sense. You have already established that she is a fan girl and there is no way Naruto, who has trained for years, would “love” a girl who obviously cares more about Sasuke than surviving. Not to mention the fact that he claims to love her? Absolutely no fucking way in hell does he love her. A) he knows next to nothing about her personally B) he is too young to even understand love C) Naruto would never truly “love” a fangirl. Honestly I am kind of pissed off with how you portrayed this chapter. Saying Naruto is in love with Sakura honestly completely ruins this story for me. This was supposed to be about a serious, smart Naruto and yet he still has his pathetic crush on a fan girl. Now don’t get me wrong I do not hate Sakura but she is completely pathetic in part one and being a serious person Naruto should recognize this but instead he claims to love her.

Naruto has Sasuke sloppy seconds

This sucks

I hope you update soon I really like this story.

Update please.

I like your story. I hope you keep going with it.

Really enjoy this story so far and hope that you can update soon.

Whenever u can plz update and make another chapter plz

J'aime beaucoup.

Fantastic chapter. I enjoyed it. Hope to see an update soon down the line!

Man. That Uzumaki Luck can be just plain “troublesome” as Shikamaru puts it. Lol

Excellent chapter!

Nice! I enjoyed this cute little chapter. And lol. I had a feeling Ino’s parents were watching Naruto...