Chiyuki and kakashi, definitely. Honestly i sort of wish chiyuki would be aromantic, but hopefully romance would be far diwn the line, e.g. mid 20s. I look forward to the plor development, its rivoting and really interesting, and im completely invested in how they’re going to uncover danzo.

I like that she's involved Shikaku and Minato now as they are two of the most loyal characters in the series. However I'm curious to see how this will affect her relationship with her father when he finds out because there's no way he wont. Also since there's only a couple years left til the kyuubi attack happens, I wonder how Biwako's fate will play out.

Ugh. This is such an interesting story but the constant black outs and paranoia Chiyuki has kinda disrupts the flow. Maybe thats just a matter of preference since they seem to be necessary to her character development. She also reminds me of Itachi but not in a good way, more like in the "I need to find the solutions to everything myself" kind of way. Sort of like how Itachi mentioned in canon how he should have relied on other people more. Just makes her seem a bit conceited/closed off if that makes sense. Idk, maybe that's intentional since you're a great writer but I think I'm more invested in how you incorporate other characters in the story and how major events will play out.

Chiyuki is a better person then me.

Cause I can hold a grudge and if I was her right there, mom would be on my shit list for a long time.

I love how you write Choza- he definitely deserves a teaching award or something

May I clarify: is Chiyuki’s chakra release JUST Iron? Or will she have a range of metals at her disposal? Considering the elemental affinities of fire and earth can make different metals. Considering her current focus on blood, I’m hoping she’ll eventually shift towards more offensive abilities as she develops her style- her stamina just seems like too much of a handicap right now, and she seems unable to pull her own weight in combat :(

“Oh boy, you're just like Kakashi, how are seven year olds so frightening, what have they been feeding you children-"

That line made me guffaw because I’m glad people think she’s unnatural, haha.

You’ve definitely succeeded in endearing Chiyuki’s character, though her low self-esteem, anxiety and critical/pessimistic mindset is sometimes a downer, I also understand why she has those traits though, and really, they make me look forward to seeing her growth and development as she embarks on her journey towards becoming Hokage. Such an objective has never really been explored, making this a unique adventure.

While I do like Chiyuki’s relationship with Kakashi, I do certain aspects of it are admittedly kinda cliché (the overprotectiveness being one). Then again, I have thoroughly enjoyed their interactions since they’ve met.

I do appreciate Chiyuki’s charisma as a character, which you’ve showcased quite well via her interactions with various people.

I am wondering how you’re going to make Shisui slot into Chiyuki’s life, considering their age difference (assuming they’ll have one?)

It would be cool to be half Hatake and half Uchiha or half Uchiha and half Uzumaki

Minato cause then i could babysit a baby Naruto and help Kushina pull pranks

thank you very much for the update :)

Wow, great chapter! I ended up reading all of Spring Day just now and I'm in love with Chiyuki even more 3

Great chapter!

Love your story! Very interesting take on it. I am just concerned that all this work in the shadows might backfire? Like I’m concerned for her, Minato and Shikaku. I don’t want them to get caught up in the investigation and end up being branded traitors or something. I understand her reasons for not involving her dad but I’m really worried it won’t be so ”child’s play” you know what I mean? It’s good she is trying to make as many allies as possible and letting them know she can be trusted and she will make sure to help everyone, but I’m just really concerned haha anyway! Can’t wait to meet Shisui! Him and Itachi have definitely been abused and pushed to their deaths too soon.

Chiyuki and Kakashi remind me of Edelgard and Hubert from Fire Emblem lol

*Happy excited squeal* Ohhhh, this chapter was EXTRA amazing! Thank you!

Has to be either Minato x Chiyuki or Shikaku x Chiyuki. Minato Namikaze and Shikaku Nara are two of my favorite characters.