Very well written. Very good imagery. I think the last few chapters dragged a bit, but otherwise there was a very good flow. Good job!

It's interesting how the stars keep coming up. First outside with Bucky, then with Harry, then the arcade, then the dream and now the memory. I'm not sure if its leading to something bigger or if it was all meant to jog Peter's memory, but either way I am in awe of your story weaving ability.

Ugh... I knew he wasn't going to tell him.

I am always surprised when a fanfiction has such depth. When it goes beyond just telling a story and into relatability. I definitely don't have that skill yet. Good work!

This is where I stopped reading last time I started this series. I couldn't wrap my head around this Tony Stark. He just seemed so cold and heartless and I couldn't imagine that he would use a damaged teenage boy in such a way.

I was wrong. Tony DID use Peter in Civil War. Maybe not to the same extent but he used him nonetheless. This story is, so far, like an exaggerated version of the two of them. I'm a couple more chapters in now and am pretty impressed with your plot and character development.

“He can be our second—”
Second experiment? The second Michael’s arms burst into flames, I scrolled through the whole chapter hoping to see that he had blond hair. Michael is One, isn’t he?

amazing story!

I can't believe this is over

DID HE REALLY JUST SPRAY HIM WITH A FIRE EXTINGUISHER I-

YES A PETER ANS NED FRIENDSHIP

i love the way you portray tony! most stories make him so ooc and a Mary sue but the way you write him makes him seem human!

superb, favorite

I really like this story. It's nice to see Harry happy and not all angstly for once,

I love this! I wonder what your novel is abut though...

I seriously can't believe that this story is almost over

The more, the merrier!