| Reviews for Plenipotent Player Prince |
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FSATAK chapter 11 . 4/22 OH you are approaching me! |
twilightnite13 chapter 7 . 3/29 I honestly expected Tohdo to be Cocytus reborn and Suzaku to be Suzaku. Interesting twist you did there. |
Primus2021 chapter 5 . 3/3 I would have gone with Momonga's Black Knight armor look rather than the 6th Doctor's outfit |
Rodenmar chapter 1 . 2/10 Forget my earlier comment, I won't make excuses but I'm sorry. I was in a particular bad state of mind when I wrote it and I have no excuses. I was just watching an infamous certain episode of Overlord S2 just a while ago and I lashed out unfairly. I am without fault and everyone is free to reprimand me if they so wish. now that I've calm down, I'm very sorry for being rude. |
Rodenmar chapter 1 . 2/10 I take issue of you putting a bumbling idiot who could barely control his npc asskissers into the head of a character well-known for his sharp intellect. what the fuck is Ainz going to do? Use his useless RPG knowledge to beat Charles in Warcraft? Pretend to be smart as people misinterpret his fumblings as a smart choreographed dance? OVERLORD is a mediocre show without an ounce of smart writing in it, the show caters to louts who loves the concept of putting game elements in the real world. I refused to believe even for a second that there is someone who genuinely thinks that some twat that plays online games all day can do a better job than Lelouch. fuck you and fuck this fic and it's whole concept. |
tymaxion chapter 12 . 1/20 Hoping you continue this soon, wonderful story~ |
DarkRain4Eternity chapter 13 . 1/14 would love to see this story continue its such an marviouls ides |
ChaoticInscriber chapter 12 . 9/10/2019 The "escaped supersoldiers" idea floated to tie in with the Human Experimentation is actually really brilliant for a bit of impish misdirection. Considering how much actual human experimentation and sort-of supersoldier-y programs in trial there are floating around, all the people who matter most will believe it easily enough, and it will cover most of their "out-of-place" issues quite well (as long as they can avoid anyone getting captured and vivisected, or if we have fatalities, dissected). Isn't it nice when that happens, Lulu? |
Zaralann chapter 13 . 6/24/2019 Interesting. |
jmcdavid chapter 13 . 6/18/2019 Now that I'm all caught up, allow me to suggest an Overlord fic for you. Digital Supreme One, by Boyzilla, is a crossover with Fate/Extra, where after the Moon Cell Holy Grail War ended with Hakuno as the winner, she had a wish while she was being deleted. That simple wish, to have friends, earned her the Regalia, the Moon Cell's control device, and had her sent to the world of Yggdrasil, where she got adopted into the guild Ainz Ooal Gown. However, after the servers were shut down and Momonga, the NPCs, and Hakuno all arrived in the New World, Hakuno fainted, and didn't wake up until after the battle between Ainz and Shalltear. The plot of the fic starts from there. |
jmcdavid chapter 8 . 6/18/2019 Hmm. You know, if any of the members of Ainz Ooal Gown had access to Worm...Nunnally would be able to probably get inspiration from good old Taylor Hebert. Such a creative girl, she took a power that should have been worthless and made it OP. Oh my, Euphie...well, good thing Lelouch got that warning about Runaway Geass, eh? |
cahaines chapter 13 . 6/18/2019 Great job on a story so far. You picked a tricky pairing however. While Code Geass is more of a 'powerless' to 'powerful' story, Overlord is of a 'powerful' to 'more powerful' kind of story. You may need a way for the enemies of Ainz Ooal Gown match and/or beat the group to keep the story going. Right now, Lelouch has nothing to really fear. Some plot ideas... hope that they are useful to this story... - Scheizel hacks/spies on Cornelia, learns about the curbstomp in Saitama, and comes to Area 11 just in time for the Narita operation - Somehow Britannia makes power suits that can just bearly match Ainz Ooal Gown - The school finds out that Nunnally can now see and walk - Lelouch is identified as Zero, and must fake his death with the help of C.C. and Pandora's Actor - Cornelia finds out about Euphemia's night trips to 'somewhere' (to Nazarick), and follow her one night only to get caught - Britannia finds and raids Nazarick (Damn it, Tamaki!), Lelouch just laughs and has Nazarick reenact [Anime Overlord :: Season 3 :: Episode 7 :: "Butterfly Entangled in a Spider's Web"]. - Euphemia is put into an enchanted sleep by Ainz Ooal Gown because she was geassed, Lelouch is on the warpath ("Whoever did this to Euphe will die a hundred times over") - Lelouch is a daddy and/or uncle (C.C.'s little jokes) - In the end, C.C. and Ainz Ooal Gown live happily ever after - Ainz Ooal Gown takes over the world - There's another player around nearby, a old foe of Ainz Ooal Gown, but who is it and how many 'friends' do they have? - Mao reads Lelouch's mind, freaks out, Rolo finds him and brings him to V.V. - Shizu Delta/Lancelot wants kitty (Arthur) - Lancelot is badly damaged, Lloyd goes full-on Jaldabaoth - Lloyd (in the form of Demiurge) is having a pudding snack, Rakshata sees this, Lloyd: "What?", Rakshata passes-out, oh poor Cecile - Ainz Ooal Gown makes a nightmare that can channel/use tier-system magic - Charles and Marianne have known of Lelouch's other life from birth and set-up everything to unlock it so he could be a weapon against V.V. (damn traitor) Do as you like with the ideas. I don't really care as long as I see more story... |
Vein Bloodborne chapter 13 . 6/3/2019 Though it could use some lemon scenes, the story is quite good. |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/5/2019 Now I can't help but wonder if Kaguya could be an NPC? Maybe Aureole Omega? It would be funny if you had other members of the Britanian Royal Family and Millitary be members of Ainz Ool Gown too, but really who is left? Marybell and Oldrin maybe, if you incorporate the other Code Geass anime and manga? |
Corren chapter 13 . 4/1/2019 More Please, we need more awesome crossovers in this fandom |