kool chapter and a new oc. nice. excited for Naruto to get that shiny Mawile next chapter. also can't wait till Naruto meets his "family" and beats them in a poke-battle

nice chapter and finally, the first evolution in Naruto's team. also the start of some romantic feelings with his pokemon ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡) kool. keep on keepin on dude.

huh, wasn't expecting the bonus whismur, but that's kool as well. another good chapter. take you time making and releasing the chapters, we can wait. also hope you grandma feels better, however late this is. :D

nice chapter, keep it up man... oh also excited to see what that new mystery pokemon naruto's gonna catch will be

good chapter, nice story building with naruto and wally. this probably doesn't matter anymore but he should get a normal mawile. save another shiny for later, cant have him catch 2 shinys back to back (or too close together) after all.

good chapter, nice shiny ralts as well. this story's real good

aaaand i'm stopping there thanks for letting him lose, NOT

Perfect and update soon please

I'm really excited for the next chapter, I hope it won't be long!

Hope to see more

Это круто, жду с нетирпением проду. Вы молодец, удачи и вдохновения вам.

Really good hope you update soon

Can't wait for more.

Another good chapter although there were a couple typos in it, it was easy to understand what you were trying to write in those cases

this sounds very interesting and I would like to see just where this is going to go and when Naruto is going to meet up with his 'family'. Also why do his parents seem to dislike him so much?