| Reviews for The Afterlife |
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   IBD Ninja chapter 9 . 1/1/2019 The Dante POV part made me laugh! |
| Plumalchemyst chapter 8 . 8/29/2018 Aw Miguel-hug- |
| Plumalchemyst chapter 7 . 8/26/2018 Aw poor thing |
| Plumalchemyst chapter 6 . 8/26/2018 Dammit Ernesto leave the boy alone |
| QuietWriter94 chapter 1 . 8/26/2018 Abuelita means “Grandmother” in Spanish. It would just be “Abuelita”, not “Mamá Abuelita”. |
| The Pygairian chapter 6 . 7/27/2018 Ooh! The tension! Cant wait for the next chapter! |
| 7h1n9 chapter 4 . 7/18/2018 Nice chapter, I can't wait to read more! |
| victoria chapter 2 . 7/16/2018 this is amazing please update again soon this is really good. |
| Teenylambofgod chapter 2 . 7/15/2018 Nice start. You did an amazing job on writing from the characters’ points of view. Not many authors can do that and do a good job of it. There are a couple of spots where the tense (past, future, etc.) is incorrect. Other than also adding in a little more descriptions (hitting the five senses: touch, taste, sight, smell, and hearing) that will paint a slightly clearer picture for the reader, there isn’t anything else that I could see that you might want to look at working on. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 I like it but why does every single fanfic about Miguel dying have him being stabbed to death? |
| victoria chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 ahh poor miguel idiot tourists find him soon hector. please update again soon i love this. |
| Shadowvixen89 chapter 2 . 7/16/2018 I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| katmar1994 chapter 2 . 7/15/2018 I hope Miguel and his family will be able to get through this together |
