its a interesting start to the story. i hope everything works out for you.

Be strong and take your time. I'm very sorry for your loss...

3. Chapter 3 then suddenly Bella's Illnes herselllf attacked like a 3-month oo;ld new \born l;ost her katra then bitten best friends a alien venom ripped then to as all then to the other as all of them turned them into her Newborns the Shaman cursed her with alien venom then Hersellllf attacked kids were young infection turned them into Teenagers then to Claire Young thjen suddenly three with them was unstopable escaped fl;ew in remarkable then aliens/Vulcans the guaerd found her then you there Pain! her screams then herself I Decree her rouge is a crimial Felix kill her then Bo Please Executionof the newborn then herself come pet diie then guilty of crimes Mauled by alien animals the seer had a vision of death her own then with four found their Corpses herself lost control she surrenders good have her destroyed Killed with them then too late All of them herself let her go she is ill then Crunched with them then good burst frely Brought with blod then Bella was struggling with control of the thirst and blod the curse of the shaman was onto them blacking outside motionless good Are Cullens Extinct then lost need but hatch kids were nnext that the real trouble started herself was really not human Alice Bella you ok my Thoat hurts badly oh my god she's with venom then with yourselves are not humans cursed PIERCED butTore by cursing with death was Bitter Immortality was in factd with venom was Spreading to their owbnveins blod began Fading the curse was real blew apart then Shatterd then Brought here good Bella is dead of Pneumon ia deceased with other dieases killed them are destrotd good Atomizedby Vaporizng deliver the ashes then lost the ablity to mate Alice Bella died of the diseae was Bitten drained but with best friends are not alive Bella yes her new Voice sounded worse then turned really lower gravely but sorrowful velvetly In seconds richer Stronger X Herself was Self-Defensive mentally and physically Shielding had a planetary power with them had powers her forehead was glowing Shielding she's gifted Alice they killed them you can't go looking this your eyes are Yellow/black with them oh my god she is glowing say Betazed Crystal power make up! BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Her shields evolved within her so they yelling nails Sparkling Stars exploding a lip rod swirling then suddenly Caught it! flames of it then her loudest trilling but ringing more soprano but angelic but Chining Xena Warrior princess's war cry Still echoing since Ancient times then Guided by Betazed the planet of Telepathy the Guardian of Seduction! Allow me to punish you for love and justice Super Sailor Betazed has Arriveed! now in the name of my planet will PUNISH YOU IS HERE! SO US NEGATRASH! Then herself felt different a cat we were framed we need more witnesses then herself never sleep of the dead but murdered host saved her life with theirs Alice she had eight so they are breeders expanded count low but steady then lost blood replicated we are what not humans we are Immortal we existed in the daylight as Daywalkers too late nulled from here brought them here now the world changed again twice relearned but it happened wore very different clothes from NASA's bodysuits were as all of them from their housing they were not mortal beings were from the 3oth century were immortal from reincarnation blown apart then shatterd but sliced were in fact not alive brought them good deceased then it really happened with as all of them onto a alien world was Vulcan were as all of them but Humans too were exiled with tribes found them into homes larger with things but Volturi as all spawned now but animals gone good dead use them then buried then now as all of them they were buried afterwards no longer alive.

I am so sorry for the loss of your family members.

Please update this

It's an interesting premise. I look forward to reading more. My only piece of advice is to work on the grammar. Thanks for sharing.

update soon