Absolutely excellent.

THIS WAS SO FRICK FRACKING GOOD, THANK YOU, YOU BRING ME JOY, NICEEEE

Just finished the first chapter.
You are literally the best Akros fluff writer I've ever met :)
Each time I read a new story, both Jaune and Pyrrha look so natural and there is almost never any OOC feeling.
And despite the huge amount of fluff, it's always so easy to read.
Actually it's in some kind a similar feeling as to watching K-on (anime). It's full of atmosphere.
And definitely all works share your unique writing style, that can be distinguished after reading a few stories.
There are only 2 things to note:
- splitting into more chapters with smaller size; rly, no time to even get a drink :)
- please more! more Arkos stories and maybe even other pairings like WhiteRose? (dreaming to see how you might write them)

Ahhh I love love love your work! And thank you for giving us starving Arkos fans beautiful fluffy content!

Why?

Why did we have to sit through countless Jaune/Weiss stuff, when we could've had this instead?

Oi, Rooster Teeth... THIS is how you write a romance.

Fanfic writers are vastly outperforming you!

Hire them, so that the poor characters don't end up with the romantic equivalent to blue balls... Again...

Really.. "I love you" and then killing her off on bleeping VALENTINES Day!

You lot wouldn't know how to do a proper romance if someone slapped you in the face with a fish.

Unlike "ChrisRainicorn" here..
They get how it's done properly.

*shakes head*

Ahum...

Sorry about that.
Enjoyed this immensely.
Please carry on.

*fades back into the background*

I couldn’t stop reading.

This was such a warm, adorable, nervous, sweet, cute little story.

These two! Gah! I just wanna squeeze them! They’re so perfect for each other!

You did an amazing job in portraying their mutual awkwardness, childish stubbornness, and warmth for each other. And how they got so super embarrassed, but couldn’t bring themselves to stop.

I could see every scene. Clear as if it was animated.

Excellent job.

I can’t wait for these adorable dorks to kiss!

In one word: Cute

Well written. But I bet Nora would either squeal in joy or groan when she hears how long they have been 'dancing around the bush'. Probably both.

You know when you’re so overwhelmed with wholesome emotions you can’t even put out a coherent sentence? You just make weird noises? That’s how this fanfic makes me feel. You write it great.

Wow, I am suprisingly weak for Arkos cuddles. I love it!

Simply amazing! Love it!

Hell yeah! I want to see some kids running around lol

I've been dying while reading this,good job

The longest pleasant read I've run into. Precious and adorable is what these two are in here. I would've love to have read up on Pyrrha's perspective in this but it was still enjoyable. Great job. Great story.

So fricken cute! Damn your stuff is good. Looking forward to whatever you post next.

Nice! Keep up the good work!