OOHHH! This is good! Well done in writing!
I love how I am already getting an idea about their personalities and they are in character.
The dialogue is natural and flows well. You have just the right size for the paragraphs and put enough detail in describing the scenarios.
Looking forward to the next chapters!

I really like the way you write. The singing scene was very plastic, it visualized on its own in my mind. I see a pattern, as the scene from that Flames fic also popped up as a beautiful picture in front of my eyes.
I wouldn't mind reading something more from you... (especially in ninja-verse, as I'm no much of a fan of AUs)

Also, even if this fic is labelled as oneshot, it clearly isn't finished, the story has only begun and begs for continuation.. Where's the rest? And who is Uchiha Itachi in this AU?

Omg this is so lovely please tell me there will be a sequel!