Great chapter!

Glad Zero Two decided to give them a second chance

This is the fanfic I have all ways wanted

I kept having flashbacks to the anime, and you almost got me with the "commotion" scene! Thanks for sharing, eager to see where you take us!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Fuckin' hell, you sure know how to make a man cry... You've earned yourself a favorite...

I hope to see you again.

Fuckin' hell, I feel bad for the Nines...

Maybe just a minor hole, but when Squad 13 was said they were joining Dr. Franx, I don't think he actually asked/ told them he was opposing Papa/ has plans.

But I think that's given. Especially after a stark difference in methods from Mistelstein and the Garden. And that's really clear here with Dr. Franx and in this story. Nice one.

On one hand I'm really critical about the cast's eagerness to create a 'baby'. It just seems that they are very annoyed with their cycles, but only think of happiness about something growing inside their body.

But on the other, I do admit these are hormonal teenagers without any experience or input on growing up. The fact that the book, in my guess, only explain the process probably makes it look harmless. Hope fully they'll learn, cuz I really hope they make a good future.

Hope you well!

Hm, I actually dislikes 02's total personality change after around episode 15/16/17. She was presented as confident, a bit cruel and erratic and even if Hiro's affection changed her, I wouldn't think it would be to the point of making the confident 02 into a blushing school girl. I like the fluff, but sometimes she needs to stand her ground, be proactive.

I also found Squad 13's adventure into puberty quite comical. True, sometimes I don't feel details like cycles are necessary in a story, but I think its crucial in DitF. Now im just waiting for the boys to realize lol.

Wow Kiyo-chan, that's some next level cloaking thingy you have!

I'm actually very satisfied in this chapter, not necessarily of the things in this one, but its clear now the Great Conflict is. Both from the Klaxosaurs, and humans. None of those V.

Kind of also surprised with Logos being so empathetic. I kind of thought that he was pragmatic, but he really cares. That's better than humans, and those guys aren't the ones whose dying! Best of them are Squad 13, and that's just because they're curious and doubtful.

Onwards to the next chapter!

Squad 13, which includes Hiro and 02, are doing really well in discovering themselves. I do like that you're having them explore and flesh out their emotions but, I think that sometimes it's a bit too much.

Especially here in the scenes with Hiro and 02, I think there's just too much hyperbole and description of either being 'emotional in the sexual way'. I know it's good to get a lot of visualization but too much and then it gets boring.

Its a small problem personally really, just something needed to be said. Nice one!

I think you should be more worried Hiro, those fangs and blue stuff on your body are definetly not normal. Even if they're interesting.

Great work so far though, I'm liking the deviations and I'm going ahead to read more!

This was a really sweet chapter, and the proposal was perfect! Thanks for sharing!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.