Soooooo good!

Yay great chapter :'D

Great chapter :'D

Hi again _ other great chapter :'D

Yay great story :D

Please update soon

Am I the only one who ships David and Chikae?

This is so good! One thing though, you said she was getting two moms.

Great fic hope you plan to wright more but one question is this fic done because the other fic you are wrighting seems to be a squeal to this one which you might to mark it as complete to show no confusion.

Holy cow, this was an intense read! You clearly put a lot of love, sweat, and tears into this story, and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you so much for sharing it!

Awesome chapter. I’m exited for the next one

One thing tho.. I know this is a Hurt/Comfort/Family fic and all. But do you think you could add some more cameos from other characters? Maybe have a short humorous moment here and there. No no no I am not asking for a full on comedy nor a drastic story change.

But maybe something simple and short as “David finds Quartermaster at the market” or “Max finds out Cameron Campbell is currently scamming the school teachers”. Some examples that don’t lead to nowhere, but again. Something that will add a small ounce of humor into it. Once in a while anyway...

another great chapter ,just one question we wil see Gwen again?

Oh... I think I prefer my theory of that kid being dead. It would probably be less painful to Max. Especially considering he was planning to slip away unnoticed with no word to Max. That's really fucked up and no wonder Max has trust issues(among other things)that

I'm happy he has David and Nikki and Neil(even if the latter two aren't there right now and David is at work, he'll be there soon. Let's just hope Max is still there when he arrives.)

This. This! Was fucking amazing. Every single word! Also; I Was Not ready for Toby! Not fucking READY BRO THAT HURT MY SOUL MAX I AM SO SORRY
Seriously this was an incredible chapter, thank you so much for posting ahh

GOD I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, I HOPE YOU FINISH IT SOON! O_O