can plz make another story like this I weirdly ship Adrien and alya

I can honestly say that I am a masochist. This killed me over and over again and I realised how much I hate this ship. I don't know why I kept reading! Anyway, thank you for allowing me the pleasure of torturing myself (I had a lot of fun). Have a nice day lol

Honestly, this portraid the Alya and Adrien ship better than I thought was possible! Bonding over what their friends don’t like and gradually growing together, it was perfect!

When Ayla said she couldn’t breath I thought Chloe was legit choking her for a second XD

THIS IS AMAZING

Alya is dang sassy XD

I was kinda surprised when I saw Alix, but I would kinda like to see that XD

Have to post this on chapter 5 'cause I already reviewed chapter 6. But this is meant for chapter 6:

I just checked this again and it says complete. I thought there were gonna be more chapters. :/

I absolutely love this story and I would love it if maybe there was an epilogue. If you don't want to, that's fine. The ending feels fine, but your story is so good I would love to see more of it. :)

Absolutely love it...i would love a chapter where she finds out he is Chat Noir that would be priceless

Ooh, loved the new chapter! I totally ship them together, and you're writing this really well. You nailed every character perfectly. Awesome job. :)

Aawwwww it’s complete, I love the ending but would you consider doing an epilogue just to show if they did marry or if they decided later on in life to just be friends.
I really love this story and I like how you portrayed their love it wasn’t just passion it started as friendship and grew in to like/crush and hopefully it does turn into love.
If they had children-which if they got married I definitely think they would-those children would be worse than the twin, they would be prank monsters.
Thank you for writing this story.

Awwwww this chapter is so cute!
I hope you update soon.

Ok, gunna be 100% honest, was switching my filters and forgot the Pairing thing for my Adrien/Mari fluff, and saw this come up. Realizing this I thought, "Ya know what? I've never even heard of this ship before, let's give it a go, it fits the word length that holds my attention and only 5 chapters." So I came in and what did I find? Adrien, Alya, and more laughter and references than I could shake a stick at! Seriously, they are Old Man Henderson and Simon Breckenridge levels of force multiplying on each other! (Look that up on youtube, The tale of Old Man Henderson, you're welcome if it's new to you.)

Seriously, I was not expecting these two to leave me gasping for air, Nor was I expecting to be backing the Nino/Mari train as hard as I now am! I'm not gunna lie, the way Alya is handling all this, the way it all is falling into place has me smiling so hard my ears hurt!

It's not the Soul Mate/Destiny ship stuff I've tried my best to avoid but sadly still find. It's NORMAL! It's shit I've seen a thousand times in school and in life! Frankly, I don't think I've ever been this happy over a relationship that ain't even official yet! You have utterly won me over and have me basically drooling for the next chapter.

I don't know what your update schedule is, but I am gunna be watching my feed like a hawk from here on for the next chapter. Alya is awesome, Sunshine child is the boy I'd adopt in a heartbeat, I want them to continue this strange journey of feelings and life you set them on...just one question...

How in the HELL will the Mask and Miraculous life effect this? Because not going to lie, Rena better factor in with dear Kitty otherwise I'mma be a grumpy bear. ;)

Anyway, great work, looking forward to what comes next, and I wish you all the luck in the world. Thanks again for the wonderful story, and I'll see ya next chapter!

I personally do support the SS Adrinette but I really am enjoying this so far. Though for a good part of chapter 4 my brain kept going to the thought of "What is Marinette feeling?" and how bad I feel for her (though might mostly be because I relate to Marinette a lot and can easily sympathize with her). Anyway keep up the good work!

This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

I really love this chapter it is so cute, and just plain old melt your heart friendship.
I can’t wait for the next update because I was thinking pretty much from the beginning that Adrien had a crush on Alya, and really want to see what Alya thinks.
Also I agree, skirts are fun as long as they are long enough to swish about.
Please update soon.

I can't even find the words to explain how much I enjoyed this fanfiction. I love the friendship you made with Adrien and Alya, and it totally keeps them both in character but makes them go deeper as well. Especially seeing that they would get along so well together with their love of Ladybug and literature and I could totally see them playing pranks- it makes Adrien connect more to his Chat Noir self too!
And as for the Nino and Marinette friendship? The one where they're both artists? Amazing!
I can't wait to see how this plays out, thanks for writing such an entertaining piece!