Reviews for Meet N Screw The Louds
Gangster Cow YT chapter 2 . 2/16
alright lets go amy lee nudes
Fapnado 2The Fappening chapter 3 . 12/8/2018
Reading the true believer part in your author's note made me remember that Stan Lee died. Only I can turn an otherwise great story into something depressing.
Jeff chapter 4 . 10/19/2018
Like the others, this chapter was really good! I got a major laugh out of all the euphemisms, especially the surprise tentacle spoop sex at the end. Don't worry too much about not getting to the other sisters though, your work's high quality and it's always worth the wait.
LoudAutomata16 chapter 4 . 10/18/2018
Whoever that friend of yours was... I'd like to shake his hand and tell him he did a good deed :)

So I fucking *loved* this chapter. It was a bit shorter than the others, but I still think it was amazingly done (and so damn hot). First off; I love the supernatural Lucy elements. It always appealed to me, and I love seeing people use it in their ding dang stories. That spell at the end was so out of nowhere it was damn hilarious XD (At least Anon got her number tho, I think that made it worth it)

The smut was really hot as well. You get pretty detailed with the descriptions, and even use biology terms almost no one else knows/uses. Gotta give props for that. And damn, you write a good anal scene. Or... two good anal scenes :3

The premise is pretty surreal as well (still, Fangs is a hero for making this happen) but I loved it nonetheless. And I'm sorry, but Maggie ain't ever coming back :D
(As much as I want her to, she won't)

All in all, pretty damn amazing. I hope this ain't the last one, but if it is... you did an amazing job...
salamander blue chapter 4 . 10/18/2018
You are back.
And with a spooky little treat for Octobe.
Excellent job.
nightmaster000 chapter 3 . 7/27/2018
Excellent chapter
RySenkari chapter 2 . 7/24/2018
This was pretty intense! It's really fun to read the very friendly and yet assertive Lynn that you've written here. I have to imagine that sex with her would be a major workout, and you didn't disappoint with your really intimate and detailed descriptions of just how fun and intense that this session was. The first scene with naked Lynn in the pool was really cute, and then the scene where she jacks the protagonist off (and gets him off quite quickly) was quite amusing. The second scene, with the actual sex itself, was fantastic, and I have to imagine that Lynn's partners would definitely need to be able to last a long time considering how much strength and energy she has.

So yeah... you matured Lynn but kept her personality appropriately intact, which is why this chapter works so much. I love seeing a more feminized Lynn still being quite fierce and physical, which is what you've shown here.

And that little shout out to a very common pairing was quite amusing too. Of course that would be in here XD

Really great work!
Dallas Hatfield chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
please do Lori
AberrantScript chapter 3 . 7/22/2018
Fupa

Consider yourself lucky this was really hot. Otherwise I'd go Tito on your *ss. :3

It was really good. I think your descriptions are going very well. My one point to mention is when they were finally playing pin the tail inside the donkey, at first it sounded like a missionary was coming to visit, but then it was like Linka was playing cowgirls and Jordans. :3 Make sure you don't miss any transition wording to help us follow along with it. But it wasn't a huge problem, heh.

It was really hot, though, and including her stuffed bunny was super kinky and delicious~

Your jokes are pretty funny. Except for 2's. I'll never forgive you for that. :3

Hmm. I wanna see a Carol, a Luna, a Lori, a Lori and Leni, a Luan, a Dana, a Becky, a Maria Santiago, and a genderbent Bobby. :3 Those are my suggestions for candidates.

You could go with a bondage scene. Super exquisite. You could do a bit of femdom actually~ Wew. You could do a gloryhole. You could stumble into the girls locker room and it's a female gangbang on Anon. :3

I'll just sit here and wait for the next one. You have 24 hours to update. The clock is ticking. :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
You should do a story with an aged Clyde and someone.
LoudAutomata16 chapter 3 . 7/22/2018
The author of Bound By Secrets
*Dj Khaled Voice* Say my name...

Anyways, I liked this a lot. I'll admit I had a little crush on our sweet genderbent protagonist (not gay) and man this was a good one. The 'threesome' as it were seemed a little out there, probably because of the sleepy nature of the girl and our love struck protagonist (with a name that makes me happy :D). And that part with Lynn Sr. at the end... I lol'd. The jokes at the end have come to be a good staple of this series.

As for Anon himself... it can be ambiguous or he can have a name. I mean, I already gave him a name by your suggestion ;)

Well done. Next chapter should be great, because I'll adopt this series and write it (the assassins are on their way)
Jeff chapter 3 . 7/22/2018
I'm okay with whatever you decide concerning Anon. I'm both concerned and excited about whatever you go with regarding Luna next chapter.
DarthSidious04 chapter 3 . 7/21/2018
Why not have Anon decide to show Luna what a man feels like?
salamander blue chapter 3 . 7/21/2018
Thay was good.
Loved the bun bun bits.
I fine with giving anons names.
And definitely excited for Luna next .
JamesSunderlandsPillow chapter 2 . 7/19/2018
Jeff, and really everyone. I said I'd consider having sleep sex be present in the next chapter, but I've decided against it. I'll explain further with the next update. Thanks to everyone who's read and provided feedback so far. You guys rock.
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