Nice, but I told you, go ahead when you're writing a dialogue

I like your story, but it's a bit hard to read at times with the sentences crammed together like that. Not saying it's bad, but seeing between will make it a lot easier to read

Pfff Shard of Flame Ice is a dick. I really like this story but I will say since it seems no one noticed in the last chapter when she is leaving the office and tosses the memory stick to ironwood you call her a wolf faunus. Can't wait for more

Quite sweet and lovely chapter, dialogues and introspection are improving. Happy new year.

I didn't get past the opening author's note. The reason being that you don't summarize me the most important character's personality and backstory like that. It completely removes the joy of discovering her and learning about her.

I glanced very quickly through it but all I see are mistakes like running sentences and sudden timeskips. In regards to those; *never* do sudden timeskips, *always* start a new paragraph or sentence whenever whoever's talking changes.

But no, the big one is that you essentially saved me the trouble of reading about this Ruby with that opening author's note, so in the future *really* don't just describe your character in an AN; let the reader see all their sides by themselves through your storytelling.

Beatiful Job about the main couple, sweet as It should be but the fight was too brief.

Simple, but nice chapter, but of possible go ahead when a charachter talks.

Everyone please do as my authors note said. If you don’t then I won’t be able to continue on with my story if you don’t then Burning rose will go on hiatus. And no I will not update Ruby Rosa until Burning Rose is complete.

Leve

Quite interesting chapter, trough i would prefer more focus on action and i hope Ruby will return soon as possible. And since i like Muay Thai, make Jaune leave. Good work.

Sweet

Really cool fight.

aww shit I'm not even safe on

Sweet

Great chappie. The dream was really well executed as well. Looking forward to what comes next