I really like this idea of Luna meeting Harry Potter in the park. I hope that you continue with this story. I enjoy the first two also.

What a great set of 14 chapters. With so many starter ideas, no wonder it is hard to keep some story lines going.

I like your dialogues. I liked the brainstorm analogy. Such wit!

Thank you for continuing that story thread for so long. It wa ce walk thru Canon's parents.

Ok so repeat my last message with Our time, Our responsibility.

Ok... this story has a lot of potential. I’m aware that you’re not updating stories right now and I’m not going to ask you to. It is your story after all. All I’m saying is that if you’re done with all your stories but you want to write I advise you continue The Butterfly Effect.

A great story. I would definitely read more.

I absolutely love this story. I want more...jk thank you for what you did write.

Please continue this story

a time for harmony and vengeance ff. net
also the author sucks because his ego can't take a single criticism, the author even blacklist one of my accounts because what i said is true. you can check his profile to see so many hiatus, abandoned he's probably mad snail the second

a time for harmony and vengeance ff. net
don't bother reading this, its just a waste of time because the author will just put it in hiatus sooner or later, just like the rest of his fanfic

I have like all but the first chapter in this you are a very good writer keep you the great writing and have fun doing it.

This give me hope that some of the others might get used.

I wish that these last 6 chapter where done has a full story by you. They are great.

I really hope that this turns into a book

Hi, nice chapter. I had a few thoughts on it.

1. I understand the bit about gaining Minerva as an ally, but I don't see the necessity of doing it right then before the second task and telling her of their plans.

2. I think that telling Minerva about the Room of Requirement risks the secrecy of the room and possibly their access to it for subsequent tasks for their mission.

3. As for the task itself, Harry could covertly shadow Fleur and help her passed the Grindylows to rescue Gabrielle and perhaps make an ally of the Delacours. As for rescuing Ron, I'd probably have Harry accompany Fleur to the hostages but then just leave Ron behind. When Dumbledore plays the forgiveness card, Harry's response would be that he would forgive Ron after Ron apologized to Harry for his attitude after Harry was chosen a champion.