Reviews for Thinking Out Loud
zutaraforever1 chapter 34 . 7/26
i just stayed up all night reading this story, it is so, sooo good! your writing is amazing, i love how you’ve written all the characters and developed them and i love how they all have a role! i love seeing toph’s personality, and i absolutely loveeeee how sokka SHINESSSS in this fic he’s so funny and i think you wrote him so well! i also love all the sukka moments so much, i adore them, i love how they play a big role in this story! and ofc all the ZUKKA MOMENTS! i live for zukka bromance so all the moments we get in this fic makes me so, so happy i love sokka and zuko’s brotherly relationship/friendship! and ofc the zutara moments, the slow burnnn, the pining, thinking about their feelings... everything was amazing! and aaahhhhh they finally got together this chapter yay! i loved this chapter so much, the ending was amazinggggggggg, i absolutely loved it! i cannot wait for the next chapter and to see the wedding and more zutara! absolutely love this fic and all your works, you’re definitely one is my favorite authors and this is one of my fave stories! :)
SaturnTails chapter 34 . 7/25
YES! Katara’s finally confessed and they’re together. Sooo happy. I thought the smut was great, even more so since it was your first time. I’m pleased you decided to include it, this story has been such a lovely slow burn, I felt like it needed the payoff. I liked Zuko being a considerate lover. The cultural differences around oral were interesting, I feel like they’ll need to talk about that a bit later, especially since Katara clearly wasn’t even aware it was a thing for women to receive but felt she was expected to give. Yay, Zuko can teach her to expect better!
I always love updates on this story, looking forward to the next already.
Erysse Melyn chapter 34 . 7/25
FINALLY! I frickin loveee this chapter. I'll be waiting for more!
Erysse Melyn chapter 21 . 7/25
omg is this based on that mall? which cut down the trees?¿ I think we live in the same place omgg
Erysse Melyn chapter 20 . 7/25
Hi Ate Jaqc! It's me Ryzel lmao I hope you remember me :

Anyways, I wanted to say that I'm really enjoying reading this I don't always read modern AU's and personally prefer emotional and descriptive writing but I am sooo drawn into this! I couldn't put my phone down. Also, flustered Zuko and Katara are so cute Keep it up
IDidn'tSignUp4This chapter 34 . 7/25
They got together!
And f*cked.

But my excitement is immeasurable because they are FINALLY together!
uchihaNaruto247 chapter 34 . 7/24
I was smiling from the beginning to end of the chapter, literally no one could’ve payed me to stop smiling this whole chapter, even through my secondhand embarrassment of reading sokkas rap. For your first time writing smut this is really good, like really good.
Durrr chapter 34 . 7/24
love your smut! it was wonderful! AND HOLY HELL SO HAPPY YOU GOT THEM TOGETHER THIS CHAPTER :D so so happy
Missycole23 chapter 34 . 7/24
Great chapter! Good job
Keepitsecret19 chapter 34 . 7/24
Steamy! Great chapter! Loving this story!
Excited-Insomniac chapter 34 . 7/24
AYYY Zuko you excellent feminist thoughtful lover you! This was all extremely well done, I didn't see any trouble with your language at all. I'm DYING to see Toph's reaction to them being together (my money is on her figuring it out before they tell her) and I can't wait for whatever you have in store next! :D
Kreshi chapter 34 . 7/24
Ah they finally got together! Really good chapter! :)
KatMora606 chapter 34 . 7/24
What can I tell you? It's just beautiful, I loved the smut narrative and The Chapter in general
Guest chapter 17 . 7/19
Hahaha Zuko’s hot and bothered

Their groups hugs are the best! But now I wonder about Toph’s background. Did she still have access to her family’s money even though she hadn’t seen her dad in a long time?

I’d love to know your ideas for where the story could go! This fic has been really rejuvenating for me, and I’m clearly invested lol.
~Sandy
Guest chapter 16 . 7/19
Lol everyone is always shoving girlfriends at Zuko. It must be tiring!

Katara’s coming around! Zuko is sweet when he wants to be...

That’s such a Sokka move! Intel of the fridge

I hate that you don’t always get weekends off! That’s the only time I can really tune out at least for a little while.

~Sandy
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