I hope your dad makes it through this just be strong you are not alone if you need my help just to talk to you then Pm me I will listen my name is Matt I am 23 years old. I hope you and your sister and your father is doing all right I have also lost two people to cancer Not a day goes by that I do not miss them but like time I have to Move on. hold on to the memories that you made with them close to your heart that’s all we can do have a great day

Well "chris" gotta say, this was an unexpected development.. but what's life without a few bumps?

I'm sure you'll make it through.

I've got a story for you, one i hard originally sent off to Neonzangetsu to write but he never did.

It's an SAOxNaruto crossover, the fourth war didn't happen the way it was supposed to, kaguya wasn't able to be resurrected before Madara's defeat. As a result, non-specific, Naruto achieved a state of undying. Being uniquely suited for the task Naruto decided to be the demonic statue's eternal warden so it could never be found again.

Years pass, the era of shinobi slowly dies out, history becomes legend, legend becomes myth, myth becomes a fairy tale. Science and technology now dominate society. With plenty of time on his hands Naruto, living the nice cushy life of a wanderer, decides to try out the beta for Aincrad online. This segment of the fic should be a test period for madara who didn't actually perish, to trap Naruto's mind in the game so the beta was meant to be the trial and error phase where everything naruto feels is wrong could be explained as a glitch in the system.

This way naruto is sort of the architect of his own destruction. Madara spent years developing this plan to torture Naruto for foiling his schemes at the climax of the fourth war. The other people trapped in the game will be used by madara to not only motivate Naruto to rush to the end, the fact madara will be randomly KILLING off players every few days will emotionally torment naruto.

Separated from his body, his power, out of contact with the nine bijuu and now with the threat of madara being out in the world while he is trapped in an illusory world he can't break out of with brute force naruto has a time limit to reach the end before madara's revenge is complete. This fic is supposed to be high tension suspense, adventure, a dash of horror with a possible twist of romance with a small helping of angst to tie it all together.

I currently lack the writing skill to give this fic the love it deserves. Your work and your passion though make me believe you would do well with this fic. I wouldn't mind helping out with grammar and bouncing ideas around with you to fill in all the holes. Let me know what you think.

I know you can get the money to help your dad! It's a longshot but you could chat with a few youtubers like Markiplier, Jacksepticeye and others. Their good people, if you give a good enough case they might help you, even jf it's just free advertising for the services of yourself and your family. A LOT of people watch them, so even if it's just a passing mention it'll still give you help.

Please consider it.

I truly hope your dad gets better and your family gets through this tough time

Asking for money to read "fanfictions" is illegal in almost every country and inmoral, because in the end the original authors never gave you permission to earn money on their works. The fact that you are doing so says a lot about your character.

sorry for your situation

i'm very sorry for you i hope your dad is okay

I like it can use some editing but I Like It

fuck you fuck your problems and fuck you goddamn hinata pussy licking im done with this pecie of shit farce

Hmph, for another naruto is not canon naruto fanfiction this story has a great setting and exposition. Great start. Looking forward for more!

like XD

you focus too much on pairings in all your stories. simply write the story itself. the romance will come or it won't. you don't actually need it to right a story. try to relax.

Small but satisfactory chapter, you said that you have difficulty writing a love triangle, try ~

My favorite paring is Naruto and Ino so I’m going to lose and be but hurt either way. In the end I’m just glad you don’t want to go the harem route since you stated you don’t wish to write a love triangle. That’s good because harem are just so unbelievably unrealistic that any story that has one can kiss realism and their story being taken serious good bye.

If I had to chose I would pick Hanabi because they grew up together and to me is a more natural paring than a girl who at one point tried to kill you. A girl you are forced to marry because you want to save her from being turned into a breeding machine.

Of course you could always make the right decision and ship Ino with Naruto and then everyone is happy haha.

It wont be a small harem with haku and hanabi we know that but I actually want it to be NarutoxHaku
If not then plz make Haku or Hanabi a reason for Naruto to retuen to his old loner personality since he has been opening up recently maybe something happens to haku/hanabi or something so that we see some development period for Naruto
For Hanabi maybe make Toneri from the The Last movie attack konoha and kidnap her
For Haku maybe make it so the mist tries to kill her?
I dunno you write it anyway cool chapter and
Thxcya

And you lost me with the whole love crap.