Reviews for Lost Thunder God
Agust-Daegu chapter 3 . 8/31
Heyy!
I have to say, I love this story so much already!
I really hope that maybe one day you'll continue it, it's got so much potential :))
VoidWolfie27 chapter 3 . 6/25
Noice.
The Real Hell Fire chapter 3 . 4/28
There are not a lot of Minato fanfics out there on here, so glad that I came across this. Hope Minato mimics his actions back when he was alive as Hokage during the night Kyuubi was unleashed by Obito, just to see the reactions of the other kids and adults alike.
Im an ilf not elf chapter 3 . 4/13
I love this story! I hope you haven't abandoned it, even though I'm guessing you have. You're writing style is amazing and makes this feel so easy and pleasing to read! I like how the story flows and how perceptive you made Minato without making it seem like he knows the future. I get excited everytime he seems to struggle with his memories and can't wait until he finally remembers!
I hope that if you haven't abandoned this that you'll update soon!
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 2/4
truly hope to see more of this. so many naruto crossovers and even normal naruto fanfics ignore the fact that if it wasnt a manga and show originally made for children, it would be bloody as hell. surpasing Attack on Titan. they train from being preteens through all their formative years to kill. to sneak and kill quickly, efficiently. the anime and manga is at it's core a childrens show with the armored rules associated regarding censuring violence and death. that your minato build is implying a properly thought out skillset of a man that butchered an army in an hour, and was raised to kill efficiently and incapacitate quickly makes me enthusiastic for more of this story.
Tony McNucklz chapter 2 . 2/4
I think you forced the izuku conversation. he's the main character in the show and manga, but in this story minato is the main character. don't feel like you have to force them to interact. izuku's interpersonal relationships always felt like plot armor to me. the reality is that someone that odd, that socially meek, isn't someone that generates a desire to converse in others. it would have made more sense for minato deciding to cultivate a cordial conversation after saw Izuku's dangerous quirk and recognized the similarity to all might. and it seems odd that minato would be willing to give away the workings, and therefore the limitations, of his ability. as a precision and speed fighter, giving away the specifics of his quirk when someone as clearly informed as minato is would know the Festival is in their future is foolish. why give the competition the extra time to prepare? and having seen a demonstration of how well izuku breaks down quirk function without help, it seems even more foolish to give it away to be broken down for countering. On top of all that, minato never shared hiraishin with anyone. not his sensei, his wife, he didn't even put it in the hokage scroll. i always felt that the squad that needed 3 of them to do it that supposedly were taught by minato was the naruto author making a convenient plot device rsther than making a thought out character decision, since minato didn't even leave behind instructions for his son to learn the technique, when he was under constant threat of assassination and had 9 months to prepare for his childs future if he was ever gone. i can't think that this was anything less than deliberate. something that inherently secretive I would expect to carry over to this life.
HALO-ODSTgirl104 chapter 3 . 2/1
This was amazing! I really love it and the angst, its a total bonus! I really want to see where this goes!
Mystic Bluefrost chapter 3 . 9/9/2019
I like this story so far. I am glad that you are not doing a Minato and Momo pairing. Minato and Kushina are a perfect pair and shouldn't be thrown away. I do like Momo and Minato, but it shouldn't mean that they should be put together.
Are you planning on Kushina being reincarnated in the near future?
I like Minato's abilities in this story. He isn't too OP with a lot of abilities. I do miss the rasengan though. Minato's world and My Hero are completely different from one another. Ninjas kill and heros don't. Minato has a disadvantage with it because he has knives and can't kill people with them.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/22/2019
Is it abandoned?
Shisui of the Body Flicker chapter 3 . 8/10/2019
Very good, I hope you continue with this fic and have not given up.
Valen Goncalvez chapter 3 . 7/16/2019
Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 4/24/2019
His quirk is fuinjutsu or space-time manipulation. Would be nice if he could still do rasengan. It was the only jutsu he created
Swamps637 chapter 3 . 3/13/2019
When shall you update?
kalmaegi chapter 3 . 11/30/2018
A platonic relationship with a female? Awesome. It'd obvious that he is too hung up with his beloved wife. I can't blame him. He didn't get to enjoy the married life much and his student crashed his son's birth.

Minato is so shady lmao. He's too much of a traditional shinobi unlike his son and grandson, that when viewed through the lenses of a world of flashy heroics, is disturbing. They probably think he was trained by a vigilante or maybe a spy who knows really lol.

Our Thunder God walks the thin line between Vigilante and Underground Hero. I can't really think of him as a Public Hero, his pragmatism just won't cut it.
19Teardrop94 chapter 3 . 11/12/2018
It's been only 4 months, but I hope you haven't given up on this. It's really good and rare to find an awesome crossover in the MHA-verse with Minato as the main character. Spelling problems are minimal but easily overlooked. A few places, I felt, needed a line break or two as it's confusing.

Hope you continue your work!

~Tear
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