Aww

I really liked that. What you did with Alex was a unexpected twist, but I really liked it. To see someone like him (without it being a female version of him named alex) and to feel empathy, I enjoyed that. Also good job on making the six year-old daughter of a mafia. Interesting how you wrote her.

Wow, loved your story! It was just so typically Alex - telling the agent to stuff it and instead focusing on the children he rescued. And I had to laugh when I read how Mafia greeted them and his cynical reaction to it. It was indeed one of my best ideas lately to introduce you to Spyfest ;)

Love it! I especially liked the part about the slobbery kiss. I cracked up haha.

Thanks for participating in Spyfest! This was fun to read:)

Great story! I love the way you showed Alex getting into his character and adopting his mannerisms, and then how Natasha essentially destroyed that. Plus, the simile "Corridors twisted and turned like intestines" made me laugh. Very creative!

Haha 'Heath Ledger watch out' xD

Yuck - the image of the Russian giving Alex the slobbery kiss... Very relatable! I liked the bit about the effusion being a facade.

The girl's swearing - very funny!

Have you ever seen the film Eastern Promises? This story reminded me of that :)

I'm glad you entered SpyFest :D

definitely a sweet little story! I love it when Alex tries to make sure other people (children) don't have to go through what he did

I Love this so much! This is beautiful!