I can understand wanting to get revenge, but wanting Harry to get killed when he was trying to protect her. I thought she would have wanted to do something to embarrass him and the Order. This doesn't seem like Hermione at all. She is not the kind of Heroine I like. I have to think if I want to read the rest of this.

With the way Hermione and Draco are so angry I hope Tonks and Lupin can escape before Draco or Hermione can come down to the dungeons.

Fantastic!

Great story! Good to see that people still want to join even despite Draco's reputation.

I'm glad Sirius didn't hand himself in. While Voldemort is distracted with him, Hermione and Draco can recruit their army.

Yeah, it's good to have friends like Blaise and Theo. I'm curious as to what Ginny will tell her boyfriend? Will she drop Harry?

I wonder what the ministry will do to them. I hope something strong enough to make sure they won't want to play gods again and decide about other people's lives.

Wouldn't Voldemort think about that as well? What if he decides to make new horcruxes and don't involve Draco?

Are they really prepared to face Voldemort? What if he can read in their minds that they are planning to get rid of him?

Severus really is a very good friend. They are all lucky to have him.

They still don't understand that Draco would have never joined Voldemort if not for their actions! They should tell them that Draco was going to join the order.

I wonder if they can use Voldemort to exact their revenge and then get rid of him as well?

Excellent

I devoured the first 3 parts of this story in only 4 days. I can't wait to see what happens to the kidnappers and how they defeat Voldemort.

This is one of the best Dramione stories out there. The plot twists make it engaging. I would normally hate what you have done to the Order, but the kidnapping of Hermione IS logical from Harry's point of view, and the the rest follows a logical chain like dominoes. That makes the story well linked.
I am a retired teacher of English Language Arts. If I'd had you in one of my classes, I'm quite certain that you would have been a top student. I'm looking forward to the next section with great anticipation.