Sweet ending. BUT: I’m confused... at Mitchum’s funeral, Jess offers Logan his condolences, saying he lost his dad a few years back, yet Jimmy shows up at the hospital after Jess calls him when Rory’s in labour... ummm...? Did I miss something?

Thank you, this was a lovely ending!

Great ending to the story

UTTERLY TERRIBLE!

Vic is possibly the best version of a teenage Rory-Logan kid I've read in this fandom. I know this is kind of a Rory-Jess fiction, but I must admit the thing I like most about this fic is Vic's relationship with Logan. I think it's interesting and I'd like to see more of it. Dad sits well on him. Lorelai's character is great, I like that she's a save haven. Rory is well... Rory. Just eh.

I really like this. It's really interesting, and I love Victoria's character! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow...

Glad that Rory had the courage to tell Jess - and he is very happy! And now Lorelai knows - her reaction. .. Thanks. More soon please.

Children are doomed in this syory: Rory didnt fight for Vicky, has she learnt something? Jess, who connects with Victoria, talks to her like they are the same age and badmouth her dad, as if they were pals.

Wow...

I'm not sure Jess should have told Victoria that her father is a douchbag but she didn't seem to mind. And she's heard it before so he didn't say anything that she hadn't heard before. I'm really liking there relationship. She really needs Jess in her life. Rory is a lost cause for me. I don't know how you're going to redeem her in my eyes. It's not like she gave up her daughter to protect her. No. Rory gave her up to protect herself. It's not like she would have been put out on the street along with Lorelai and Luke. Luke has a great standing in Stars Hollow. He wouldn't have lost his diner. I doubt Lorelai would have lost her Inn either. Rory's Grandparents as well as her father are rich. They would have helped her out. So, I really don't get why she gave Victoria up. Or why everyone just let her. As for Rory being pregnant, she should have told Jess as soon as she found out. Is she thinking that Jess won't be a good father? He'll be a great parent. Rory's parenting skills leaves something to be desired. Looking forward to the next chapter.

It’s pretty bad that classless Jess is badmouthing Logan to Victoria when she loves her Dad. But then again, Jess has always had a chip on his shoulder the size of a Giant Sequoia Tree. Rory’s character in this story is really annoying as well. The best thing for Victoria would be to reunite with her father. Perhaps now that Mitchum has died she can do that. Hopefully things will get better for Logan as a result.

I cant believe Jess, worried about Victoria, tells her Logan is a douchebag. Whatever he thinks, he is her father. Is that supposed to show that he is smart and sharp? Horrible display of caring. Im sure you have a plan, Ill keep reading. Thanks for posting.

I want Jess. Victoria could use more doses of Jess and Lorelai. More please.

Plot twist! Yes i would love more! You cant leave it like that lol