Ah man, finally getting around to reading this update was an idea gifted to me by the spirits. It’s been a while since I’ve read this, and I’m happy to see that it’s still slapping just as hard. The way you’ve evolved and fleshed out your characters and story and made them stand out and play off of other characters as smoothly as Jordan and the others do is an impressive feat indeed. I can’t wait to see how you continue to pen the story and how the gang ends up.

Also, if you ever do decide to cancel the story and post the outline, there’s no reason you can’t come back and finish it as the motivation finds you with no more pressure. This is all you enjoying your damn self in your free time and you don’t owe anybody chapters that you don’t wanna write. The fact that you’d give everyone the closure of knowing how it ends if you did stop working on this is incredibly considerate and I can certainly say that you are not only an incredibly talented writer, but you are also a nice person. We stan an icon of the community.

I love the prologue, let's see what the rest is like.

As a side note, I wonder if Bioware actually put a SI into canon? If it weren't for the fact that Conrad Verner has a frigging PHD (surprised the hell out of me!) then he could easily be a player SI trying to tag along with Shepards crew. Can you imagine though, waking up in the ME 'verse only to learn you are stuck in Conrad's body!

Wow that was a good chapter. I liked that at least in this case everything goes as planned or nearly as Planned. Not always does it need pushed Drama or Death. I'm looking forward to more of the my opinion best Mass Effect Fanfic I ever read :)

Well done!

nice

A nice addition of Fehl Prime. Thank you for the AN. Hope that your writing brings you joy again and I'll patiently wait for when that day comes. Take care.

Goddamnit this bloody update gave me the motivation to do my English study

each time you upload to this story, it brightens my day

I am thoroughly enjoying your story of Jordan and crew! Such a brilliant twist of events! Love that you've given us a new perspective on Tela Vasir too. Always thought she should have had a bigger room in ME. Anyway, PoE has definitely become one of my favorite stories! Looking forward to what comes next!

Ah, the MC's idiocy at it's finest. Now, it's rearing its head off and came to bite his ass.

If I were in our MC position I would've told them about our enemies, withholding those kinds of information will get someone killed.

Man, I fucking love Kasumi. Would've been perfect if she got her partner/lover with her or that we could romance her :(.

Man, he should probably check the news and intel, use the Geth effectively by sending out stealth ships with scouts that have cloaking abilities, and start planning on what he would do.

Man, it would've been better if there's no other guys and gals from our universe transported here or at least have just another one that came along with our MC but went a few years before ME1 starts.

Ah, he's stupid, didn't think things through, didn't made a backup plan or two, and most importantly he could've done things a bit more discreet. He made a lot of mistakes that'll bite his ass sooner or later I really hope he learns from this situation.