Reviews for Fibers of the Universe
Khy Dragon chapter 8 . 7/3
Come on, man!
EvaShinobiKaiserKnight chapter 8 . 5/28
hey I will be happy yo take this story off your hands... as long as you dont mind me making the Ultimatrix the Omnitrkx again.
Lir123 chapter 7 . 5/4
it is a shame to know the existence of this crossover and that you are not going to continue it.
Omnisaurus chapter 8 . 5/2
Ah shame that you're no longer writing this story but I understand you decision. I lost my passion for one of my stories as well and I know how it feels to no longer want to work on something you no longer have a drive to continue on with. With all that said, I hope that you find someone adequate that who will give this story the justice that it deserves.
AnimeGoji91 chapter 8 . 5/1
Don't get up man you are the BEST and I hope you continue this story or something soon!?
Starlord Master chapter 8 . 4/30
It's your story.

I so loved this story.

Last day of April!
OmnitrixUltimateGod chapter 6 . 4/15
Hi, it's me again. I hope I don't bother you and how well you read this comment, but the truth is that I hope that you will write again in this story and, if you allow me, I could give you some suggestions to make the story more interesting . . . . . . . . . and only.
1-New aliens, you can use the ones from "5 years later - The Ink Tank", since they have their own Ben 10 inspired aliens with their powers and weaknesses, they also have their own YouTube channel as their own Wiki page with which you will know what is the potential of each of the Omnitrix species
2-E pointed out that the personality of this Ben, how to say that he is a little transparent since he seems a perfect character, since he is not, must give him a personality combined with the irresponsibility of the Omniverse, the attitudes of sacrifice himself. for the sake of others like Alien Foce / Ultimate and why not his sarcasm just to annoy Ryuko indirectly, and most importantly, despite being a Hero he is still human, his actions can directly or indirectly harm an example (when Ben knows who the murderer of Ryuko's father could be and, as we know, he would kill to know it and that one of his best and first friends kept this type of information, well, you will know)
3-The subject of relationships I think that these types of stories should be taken calmly, because their personalities and their attitudes are different and what will be the reason in this story that they fell in love with the same person or the action, it would be something so inorganic, but as the saying goes, opposites attract sooner or later. because the best Fanfiction Crossover stories that must match certain characters are the ones that take time, but it has logical reasons
4-I know that I am demanding a lot and that you have a life and I respect that but in my belief if you are going to end this story or not, it must end well I hope you read this comment
OmnihancedEternatus chapter 7 . 4/14
Hello, my friend "OmnitrixUltimateGod" just told me about your Crossover and the truth has great potential and then I thought about the transformation "Ketsu of the omnitrix" and how you could create your own story, about the unique powers it could have. The components that make up the "Ketsu of the omnitrix". The fibers of life have been closely intertwined in the Ultimatrix, therefore greatly enhancing the fibers' natural mutagenic capabilities. As such, Benketsu can be modified in various types of Ultimatrix samples, that is, any bearer of the "Ketsu of the Omnitrix" could have the potential to have all the powers of said sample
OmnitrixUltimateGod chapter 1 . 4/14
Well, this chapter has its good points and cons in the first place, it revealed to us how Ben, even with his Omnitrix or Ultimatrix, showed that he sacrificed himself and how Ben and Ryuko would have a future together and that seems incredible to me. . . Second, many of the stories barely use Ben from Omniverse, but I think it fits in well with Kill la Kill in third place. I hope you update and continue because I'm already hooked on the story
OmnitrixUltimateGod chapter 7 . 4/14
I hope you will follow this story as soon as it is very interesting and I think since it is the third most popular of your stories it should take a bit of a priority, is my opinion. Hope you update it soon.
Neurological Donut chapter 7 . 4/3
Cool fic. Keep it going, it's entertaining.
chidoriprime chapter 7 . 3/19
Please, continue!
thetyrant67 chapter 5 . 3/15
I'm sorry, but that was way too inconsiderate of Ben. I'm pretty sure that if it were the real Ben Tennyson he would have went straight to Ryuko after she was flung into the water and helped her. The fact that he didn't even bother to check just shows that the Ben you have here as the MC, is not the same as the true hero I watched in the series.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
whelp you already made Ben your OC so he can have the omnitrix damaged and not working correctly and be nerfed to fit your wrong scaling and lore knowledge.
thetyrant67 chapter 4 . 3/15
Not gonna lie, I'm liking this more than that other Kill La KillxBen 10 crossover.
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