Reviews for Surprise
Natters chapter 1 . 1/23
Good fic
Kithia chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Nice
angelofthelordt chapter 1 . 5/29/2019
Um, that was not great. Maybe improve your writing and don't rush.
MidnightWriter44678 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019
This story is amazing, and I would absolutely die of happiness if you would be willing to write more! Hope to hear from you!
Patougv chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Very good. Could have been a nice start.
CarissaWinchester chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
make more chapters it's an amazing story
Wolfy76398 chapter 2 . 1/4/2019
You should really make more parts for this it’s a great story and I would personally love more to it
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
interesting
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2018
I really liked this. It's a shame that it's not longer. Thank you for posting!
Caringheart chapter 1 . 7/9/2018
Nice!
Cathy Sullins chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Love it
Diana chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
Thanks for posting
LAIsobel chapter 1 . 7/4/2018
this was a good idea. what got me the most was dan and his protective reaction.
The Best Guesst chapter 1 . 7/3/2018
I like it! Great story idea!