Reviews for Surprise |
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Natters chapter 1 . 1/23 Good fic |
Kithia chapter 1 . 8/4/2019 Nice |
angelofthelordt chapter 1 . 5/29/2019 Um, that was not great. Maybe improve your writing and don't rush. |
MidnightWriter44678 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 This story is amazing, and I would absolutely die of happiness if you would be willing to write more! Hope to hear from you! |
Patougv chapter 1 . 3/16/2019 Very good. Could have been a nice start. |
CarissaWinchester chapter 1 . 1/20/2019 make more chapters it's an amazing story |
Wolfy76398 chapter 2 . 1/4/2019 You should really make more parts for this it’s a great story and I would personally love more to it |
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 8/12/2018 interesting |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2018 I really liked this. It's a shame that it's not longer. Thank you for posting! |
Caringheart chapter 1 . 7/9/2018 Nice! |
Cathy Sullins chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 Love it |
Diana chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 Thanks for posting |
LAIsobel chapter 1 . 7/4/2018 this was a good idea. what got me the most was dan and his protective reaction. |
The Best Guesst chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 I like it! Great story idea! |