| Reviews for Blocking Out the Sun |
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  Skeletalrepublic chapter 8 . 7/3 I feel like a rewrite might be needed for this story. Too much action happening at once with very little downtime gets confusing since it's hard to piece together all the individual events. Plus, this feels more like a Dark Souls Isekai than a. Dark Souls x RWBY crossover since most of the time the encounters are between Dark Souls Characters and none of the natives of RWBY. i like the concept of the story with Characters and Players of Dark Souls getting sent into the world of RWBY, but I feel that your execution is lacking. Overall, this chapter was not bad, but it was incomprehensible with every event and POV swap. While I have no power over how you write your stories, I feel that you might need to hit the reset button on this one to flesh it out better. |
 CocoNutty2002 chapter 7 . 4/25 This story, out of many, feels like I watching a live commentary of a crossover show. Yes, I like the serious moments, but it feels like a game. Gankers, cosplayers, and dealing with being foreign folks! Solaire is grand and the others are nice as well. |
| Ranch14 chapter 7 . 10/25/2019 Why is it that every Dark souls crossover I come across ends up vaguely similar to this. With the Chosen Undead being really weird and meeting other player characters. Does t stop it from being really good though. Especially that very last scene. |
| Utruk Doomhammer chapter 3 . 9/15/2019 Solaire best mate 10/10 |
| sacke110 chapter 2 . 1/16/2019 Damn, that confrontation by Solaire at the end was great. Pure gold. |
| thetyrant67 chapter 1 . 10/25/2018 This is adorable! I love Solaire! |
| Axccel chapter 3 . 8/24/2018 *sniff* Oh, sunbro! |
| THE Glorious Him chapter 6 . 8/19/2018 I like the idea that Chosen is into traps, the story is pretty great, too. |
| Nugget O Awesome chapter 6 . 7/30/2018 I am so confused |
| Lt.Frostdromeda chapter 6 . 7/29/2018 Amazing chapter , nice seeing Oscar again tough him working with Adam doesn't sound right... Maybe you won't do that who knows Also are best girls Ciaran and Darkmoon Knightess gonna appear? |
| Evinco chapter 6 . 7/29/2018 I understand that Geist is powerful, but shouldn't you cover his issues against being burned alive. The main character should have some PTSD from the Flame |
| Raraiki chapter 6 . 7/28/2018 Wow that last scene... |
| Zapper3000380 chapter 5 . 7/21/2018 oof This is pretty good. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2018 ...so Chosen is into that kind of stuff(traps)...not that i can disagree. Funny and great chapter. |
| Hunter of Entities chapter 4 . 7/15/2018 Is this gonna be semi serious while also being like 'if dark souls was anime'? |
