Awww this was so adorably sweet! I also laughed when Parker thought Eliot was part bear and that that would explain a lot xD hahahahaha! Also with Eliot saying she had no more brain damage than usual, that was hilarious xD amazing job!

This was soo cute! I love these team as family fics. So sweet how they were all taking care of Parker. And they were very in character as well. Great fic!

Great story.

So sweet to see Parker's team take care of her 3

great short story! keep it up.
you really captured the characters in this story

I really enjoyed this story - you captured Parker perfectly, the shock/pain/embarrassment/panic came across so strongly that I could see it happening and her reaction to Eliot getting too close was totally in character. It was a wonderful insight into all of their reactions and you get her voice spot on which is difficult for such a complicated character.

Really cute, hope you write more stuff like this!

Oh, this made my heart happy. You did so well portraying Parker's fears and insecurities, and preference for taking care of herself. Everyone's concern was spot-on, especially Eliot trying to check her over, and being so strangely gentle about it, from her perspective. Very nice!

A Xiaolin S Story please