I love this one so much! Steven is so sweet in his own way, and Jackie was portrayed perfectly!

Awe so cute!

this story was SOOOOO ADORABUBBLE ON SO MANY LEVELS. poor Jackie on her wedding day! things like this don't happen to Jackie Burkhart-soon-to-be-Hyde, especially on HER wedding day! but everything was fixed just right and made so perfect for her again, which is exactly the kind of thing that happens to Jackie Burkhart-soon-to-be-Hyde. I was so sad when Jackie decided that she was going to cancel the wedding because she was taking the fact that everything was going wrong as a sign that she shouldn't marry Hyde, but then everything getting fixed was a perfect sign that they should be getting married. and WHAT THE HECK KELSO. he's such an idiot on so many levels and you definitely helped to prove it, even though he's a lovable idiot. XD when Red made him have time outs in the corner was absolutely hilarious. XD the scene with Hyde and Jackie talking between the elevator door was so adorabubble on so many levels too! my favorite was the idea that the mismatched flower centerpieces were actually matching with each other for the fact that they were the flowers that were in the corsage (did I spell that right) that Hyde had given her when they went to the prom together in the first season. even though their whole date that night was meant to show Kelso something and that she and Kelso ended up back together for that time, it was cute how you brought it back up and that Hyde remembered it so vividly and the type of flowers that he gave her. it was so great and that was my most favorite part of the story! this little story was so adorabubble on so many levels (I promise that's the last time I'll say it!) and a nice little read; I read the whole thing in one half hour break practically, that's how much I loved it. amazerful job girlie!

This fic is one of the best that you have done. Especially this chapter.
I always enjoy when Red plays the role of father over others, but especially with Jackie, it's delicious to watch.
The detail of Hyde for Jackie was beautiful and surprised me. I sighed in front of the screen.
And the end kept me smiling all day.
I hope you come back soon with a storm of inspiration!

I would love to see a sequel to this

Aw, I love this last chapter! It's got humor and wisdom and sweetness.

Kelso sure is dedicated to singing "A Thousand Bottles of Beer on the Wall". If only he'd had that kind of focus in school.

I like Red's take on luck vs. being a dumbass and that he gives Jackie a different perspective to consider about her wedding. She might not have the wedding of her dreams, but she is marrying the man of her dreams. And at the end of the story, we see she's absorbed what he's said - much to Hyde's confusion (but also, ultimately, happiness).

I really enjoyed Jackie and Hyde's interactions at the end. Hyde wondering how long Jackie had been in the elevator with Red, thanks to her repetition of Red's wisdom, is very funny.

Hyde being responsible for the "wrong" centerpieces and why is very touching, and I'm glad Jackie recognizes how much this wedding means to Hyde, too. And it means a lot to him because a) it means a lot to her and b) he's marrying the person he's happiest to be with.

I like Red passing the extra-shot-of-courage flask to Jackie instead of Hyde. She definitely needed it more. The flask's backstory is great, too. You bring in Frank, Red's Kelso/kettlehead, and it's a good bit of continuity.

Thank you for writing this story, Prissy! It's a great addition to the ZMA, and I really enjoyed reading it. :D

Awesome and in character. Especially red and hyde, Laughing and the centerpieces and wanting to kill Kelso. Would have liked to have seen what the fight was about and Her Actually asking Red to give her away,

Of course the fight was about him not caring lol stoic Hyde always stoic. Shouldn’t you be reading your man better by now Jackie? A little reassurance would’ve been nice too Hyde but whatever. The reconciliation moment was very very precious. I’ve got SOOO emotional when he said why the flowers didn’t match what Jackie ordered. So thoughtful! And, yet, I could see Hyde doing that. He may denied it, but he is a softie at heart!

Kelso worrying about dying, making fun of Hyde and then shoving Jackie at side while shouting “Freedom!” lol. I love him so much, what a dork/jerk. Never change.

Red’s advice was a cliche truth, you know? Everyone says it, but... It’s true, it just is. I loved that he had a kettlehead of a friend hahah And for a kettlehead he was pretty important I mean, he passed down to Eric and now Jackie, so... Yeah. Even dummies leave their marks.

RK little moment was as precious as in canon, could’ve totally see it happening at the show. And the JH moment oh! I’m babbling, but just wanna say it one more time: I really really love it! Thank you for this amazing history.

Love it, LOVE IT! Can't wait to see what you come up with next

Absolutely loveddd it!

Yes! finally! great ending prissy

Red telling Kelso to stare at a corner in the elevator is funny. I like that the idea came back at the end of the chapter. You're so good at creating humorous endings (good timing, like right before a commercial on TV).

Of course Red would be more interested in a Packers game than Hyde and Jackie's wedding

I'm not surprised Kelso's the reason the elevator stopped. But to burn Jackie by keeping Red away from the wedding? The man has a death wish.

I am surprised, however, that Red didn't kill Kelso, despite Jackie's intervention. Also surprised Jackie didn't actually claw up Kelso's face. He got off lucky (but he often does on the show, too).

Such a true line when Kelso says he's better at breaking things than fixing them.

Kelso remains ever Kelso, doesn't he? Naively, selfishly thinking that Jackie would engage in some *Three's Company* fun with him if Laurie were stuck in the elevator with them.

Kleso, adorable as always, but how I would like someone to hit him ... hard.

I have already left my reviews, I have done my homework :)

I hope you update soon and, when you can, continue with "Finders Keepers"

It was fun to see Jackie wanting to kill Fez. But, please tell me this has a happy ending.

Yay! Finally an update! Beeen waiting forever on this thank you! Update again soon!