| Reviews for Can I Have This Orange Juice? |
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Guest Sasha2702 chapter 1 . 6/4 I loved this story! and I know it’s like two years old already, but as a fellow writer, I know I love getting reviews, even for old works. Reading this on my phone and I’ll try to check out your other stories soon. :) |
Tiffanymarie316 chapter 1 . 2/25 THIS WAS SO GOOD thank you for your talent ahhhhbdjbdkshf |
Reidseeker chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 I was thinking...he's a growing boy and perhaps he grew to the point the spider DNA had to catch up. Meaning it will probably happen at least one more time |
icecatfire chapter 1 . 11/29/2019 O.o ... Well, you know how to make one worry for the little spider. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 SO THATS WHY YOU GAVE IT THAT TITTLE, I WAS SO CONFUSEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD |
wyhtamago chapter 1 . 5/24/2019 This is awesome! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2018 Really good :) And to answer your question- ipad in bed should probably be asleep but this is more important lol |
XiaoR18 chapter 1 . 10/24/2018 que lindo |
ALonesomeAuthor chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 So sweet and fluffy! :D I loved it! :D Especially Bucky and Peter! We need more brotherly/friendship Peter and Bucky! |
Candymouse22 chapter 1 . 8/6/2018 This was so cute and the ending was quite funny! |
gwensunny chapter 1 . 8/3/2018 Must. Have. That. Juice. Hahaha. I love it. I'd love it even more if there was a chapter two tho |
starfire25 chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 aww... cute. |
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 7/5/2018 awe love |
Luc16 chapter 1 . 7/4/2018 I like it! I like how described all of their concern and Peter's worsening condition. I also love how it was Bucky who interacted with him first! this was good, kept me engagedtwo future suggestions from a fellow writer, try to keep the same perspective when telling the story. if you do want to switch perspective, put a line or an indication that this is now someone else's point of view. also, "hoped" should be "hopped out of bedall in all, great story and good job with the characters!oh and I'm reading on my phone |
Uia chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 love it |