This is interesting, and I would like to read the rest if you're still working on rewriting it. However, perhaps you should change the complete designation of the story since it no longer has all those previously written chapters which would resolve in a proper ending. Just a suggestion.

I'm really excited to see more of this. it looked very interesting

This story is so fun- befuddled!Severus is adorable. I hope you continue it!

Oh this is wonderful! I love seeing Snape's thoughts here, both funny and adorable with all that failing denial and acerbicness. What a novel way to have a time travel MOD!Harry fic!

Haha - I love this idea of a time-travelling Harry running circles around a certain baffled young Potions master, and going from your summary, I'm curious who, if anyone, he ends up shagging...
This kid certainly doesn't sound like an 11-year-old, and if he is, I think Severus has been teaching him for a long period of time, directly or indirectly. He seems somewhat fond of his teacher, but either has survived that war or has practised duelling with Severus - why else the reflex to grab his wand...?

That said, I don't think it's fair to waste Hermione's talent on babysitting Neville. Severus has been a gifted student himself and Harry is compassionate - would the two of them really just do this to her?
(And would a self-sufficient man like Severus allow himself an afdiction to cigarettes? I think it would be beneath him...)

My condolences with your hard drive! Redoing work you had already finished s*cks... :-(

Very interesting! Can't wait to see where you take this. When will we find out who took care of Harry all these years, or will we? And a potions prodigy! Wonder what Dumbledore thinks of a Slytherin Harry.

Just found this. Love the story so far, seeing time-traveling Harry from Snape’s perspective is so funny! Thank you :)

I get this feeling that Harry and Luna share an uncanny resemblance

Where has Harry been and who has taught him this advanced magic? I love a Slytherin Harry!

I don't read. I skim.

But your stories? I actually sit down and absorb every word.

Thank you for sharing! And thank you for making it realistic. I appreciate that.

I can’t wait to see where this story goes! I am greatly enjoying it so far.

Hiho, I am Sure you are quite busy, but IT would be really great to read the Rest of this story. So pleeeeeease?!

The tone in Snape's reflections is incredibly entertaining. :)

Ooh more please. I quite love this story. I must say that I haven't read something like this yet and it has proven to be a great entertainment.

I do love a flustered Snape. It's very endearing somehow.