What I liked the most was how accurate you wrote the VLD team!
Great job!

I love this! You do action and cliff hangers so well while still begin true to the characters

Have I mentioned I love the fluffy bits? Well, I LOVE the fluffy bits!
Lance insisting on calling the Lira Rosie, Keith's awkwardness with Lira, Lance and Keith having to work together, booby traps... okay, I love it all.
Favorite part? Hm, either Lance calling Ryltax a moron and Keith getting offended, or your descriptions of the paladins coming out of the pod. (Seriously, I love Pidge's!)
There are so many little things you inserted in here, especially in this chapter, that I just love and can see them doing.
Overall, a very good story, with a nice mix of action, working together, and peril.

Only Lance could be indignant, while pinned to the ground by a very big, angry Galra and suffering major injuries.
Huh, it never occurred to me that Pidge could use her bayard for that! Unusual, but effective.
Aw, I loved their little "discussion" of who needed cryo-pods and they didn't.

What's going to happen after the next chapter of fluff...?

I am not mentally prepared if you're going to do something sad or angsty or something..

Mm, yep, and everything continues to fall apart. Literally, in some cases.
It started off so, so simple, but has quickly become so, so complicated. In a good way! Nothing ever goes easily with these guys.
My only question is, who is going to spend the longest in the pods when this is all over?
I am too afraid to ask about Shiro...

Can't wait for the next chapter

Gah! Everything is going wrong! I knew this would happen!
...it would be boring if it didn't.
Anyway, thumbs up on the action! You describe it well, and how the characters respond. (And I have to laugh at Hunk's logic that does technically make sense.)
Okay, favorite part... Lance distracting Ryltax, and Keith thinking that Lance was screaming at him.

Good idea, Shiro, turning off coms. Well, sort of. I feel like that could really back fire.
Anyway, I like seeing how the different teams work together! They have a funky dynamic at times, but it just somehow works. Throw in some Coran, and voila! Instant organized chaos.

I love this! Your writing style is so interesting because it is not overly complicated, yet not too simple, and you tell the story like an episode from the show.

Now thats just cruel, Lance. Forcing an innocent Keith to hold a distressed baby? He's still adorable about it. I can just picture Keith, frozen, unable to decide whether he should grab a weapon or let Rosie/Lira hold his fingers.
Well, they are safe now, but I highly doubt the peace will last long!

Aw, Lance is so cute with the baby! And Keith is just... stiff. Adorable in his own way.
I just love how Pidge words that. Make a disaster of the castle.

Keith and Lance would make great fathers XD

Oh god.. I can only imagine what happens when you leave Keith and Lance alone with a baby and Keith has to protect both the baby AND Lance..

Is it bad that I just grin when I see everything is going to fall apart?
Really like it so far! You have got the characters down pat (seriously, Keith and Lance are basically mortal enemies until it is time to watch each others back. Why? No one knows.) and they work together so well! Coran is goofy. Hunk is funny. And Pidge, of course, is so stubborn.
So many things could go wrong from here...