I know that your probably busy but when you get a chance pls update. I’m super into this and I just binge read it. Your such an amazing writer and so inspirational. I really love this whole story thing and you made me actually ship Ernesto and Victoria witch is so awesome bc they didn’t interact at all. I love the character development. I love the storylines. I just love this whole thing so much!

Damn! Just binge read the whole story and I'm not disappointed! It can be pretty hard to write fics about crackships of Pixar movies of two characters who barely spent a few frames together and unlike some other stories, there's some actual character development going on, finally, since a bunch of the stories just like "yep immediate love" and yeah pretty short time but I can appreciate the fact of actual development. Anyways, great job so far! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

Sooooo good update soon! :)

Has this story been forgotton about? I really love it

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
I think Ernesto and Victoria are soooo cute together!

I loved this chapter I can’t wait to find out what happens next.:) great chapter!

Is it weird I'm getting a 'frozen ' vibe thing from this. Don't get me wrong it's awesome but it's just a theory because we'll in frozen Anna felt like Elsa was shutting her out and in this Ernesto felt like Hector was abandoning him when he needed him. And the love experts aka the trolls tell Anna she needs an act of true love, while before that they were trying to get her with Christoph. And in this the man who helps them tells them it's an act of true love they need. While also trying to learn how to gain the love of his frozen Anna tried to get to Christoph to share true loves kiss but it was not the kiss that saved her. It was her sisters act that proved she loved her. So here is where my theory begins. Yes Victoria and Ernesto are cute together I ship it like hell. But I don't think it's Victoria who saves him. I think near the end it will be Hector who does a true act of love that saves him. Even though Ernesto had murdered him he forgave him. That's my theory. And if you ever do update again I'll be interested to see if I'm wrong and how much better your version is than mine lol. I really love this so hope you do update very soon.

Can’t wait for the next chapter
Keep up the good work :)!

I like where your going with the story and I can’t wait a for you to continue, Coco is one of my favourite movies and it’s great to see a story based on some of my favourite characters from the film and with your own twist, that’s what makes it interesting keep it up.

Honestly, I’m not sure how I feel about Ernesto and Victoria as a ship. Even more startling is I think I almost jumped aboard it with this chapter. In the end whichever way you would prefer to take the story is probably what will be best.

Really enjoying the story so far! I got the vibe from the story awhile ago that you were doing a Victoria/Ernesto plot

Ooooo! A new addition to the plot. It was already interesting before, but now I’m so curious I don’t know if I’ll be able to go to sleep.

Oml this is amazing! Please keep up! I’m thinking of making a sketch of Ernesto Hugging Tia Victoria tight. (After letting him out of the bell) And Victoria rolling her eyes or just Looking surprised.

This chapter was really good. The way everything played out with Victoria’s reasons and plans was just perfect. I could actually see her and Coco’s body language saying the reasons behind it weren’t fully sound and the plan wasn’t fully baked. I think if it had been done any differently it would have seemed impossible for the other Riveras to be as willing to accept it.
I especially loved the scene between Ernesto and Hector. It gives Ernesto even more stuff to think about his past actions with (willingly or unwillingly) and gives a start to redefining the depth of the bond between him and Hector.
I also went back and reread that section from the first chapter. That really helped smooth out the chain of events in that paragraph. It also allowed me to notice that there is a slight run on sentence along with the word before is a little over used in the last paragraph.

It took me a couple of passes before I decided to try reading this, but I’m very glad I did. The execution so far is pretty good. The way you have embellished on Ernesto’s personality is really interesting. The only thing I noticed is the transition from him standing to sitting behind Victoria on Pepita was choppy. One second she is turning to face him while on Pepita and next second he is suddenly behind her. It makes that section a little confusing to read.