Reviews for a different beginning |
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anxi609 chapter 4 . 5/7/2019 Try updating you dont have to but it would be nice... |
bobtankerman chapter 1 . 2/19/2019 I like this more then the last wolf faunus |
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 4 . 1/5/2019 Good chapter. I like the changes you are making. Nice A/N very well thought out and explained. |
ManticoreBlues chapter 4 . 12/20/2018 I love the fanfic, can't wait for a update. also depending on what you change you may want to think about giving Ruby a secondary weapon like daggers, throughing knives, etc. or a second primary weapon that allows her to defend and attack an opponent that fights up close and personal |
Chewie15 chapter 3 . 9/4/2018 Lol, I can't wait for more |
Musicalwolf4015 chapter 2 . 7/12/2018 I love it! I hope you don’t bail on this story |
ALoveMysteriousWritter chapter 2 . 7/10/2018 I would maybe be more discripted in some parts but over all good. |
Chewie15 chapter 2 . 7/9/2018 Nice job, I can't wait to see what you do next |
Nathaniel Zellos chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 What story was it that inspired this one? Chapter one looks good, and I can’t wait to see where you take it from here. (Maybe look into getting a beta reader to polish out grammar and spelling?) |
Musicalwolf4015 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 I love this story so far! But there are some grammar mistakes but oh well! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 This is a really good story beginning Hope to see more soon |
sonkan91 chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 Oh I like this. Can't wait for more. |
Last Primaris chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 I liked it, please make more |
Chewie15 chapter 1 . 6/29/2018 Dude this is so good! I vote keep this one. |