Reviews for a different beginning
anxi609 chapter 4 . 5/7/2019
Try updating you dont have to but it would be nice...
bobtankerman chapter 1 . 2/19/2019
I like this more then the last wolf faunus
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 4 . 1/5/2019
Good chapter.

I like the changes you are making. Nice A/N very well thought out and explained.
ManticoreBlues chapter 4 . 12/20/2018
I love the fanfic, can't wait for a update.

also depending on what you change you may want to think about giving Ruby a secondary weapon like daggers, throughing knives, etc. or a second primary weapon that allows her to defend and attack an opponent that fights up close and personal
Chewie15 chapter 3 . 9/4/2018
Lol, I can't wait for more
Musicalwolf4015 chapter 2 . 7/12/2018
I love it! I hope you don’t bail on this story
ALoveMysteriousWritter chapter 2 . 7/10/2018
I would maybe be more discripted in some parts but over all good.
Chewie15 chapter 2 . 7/9/2018
Nice job, I can't wait to see what you do next
Nathaniel Zellos chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
What story was it that inspired this one? Chapter one looks good, and I can’t wait to see where you take it from here. (Maybe look into getting a beta reader to polish out grammar and spelling?)
Musicalwolf4015 chapter 1 . 6/30/2018
I love this story so far! But there are some grammar mistakes but oh well!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
This is a really good story beginning

Hope to see more soon
sonkan91 chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
Oh I like this. Can't wait for more.
Last Primaris chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
I liked it, please make more
Chewie15 chapter 1 . 6/29/2018
Dude this is so good! I vote keep this one.