Omg this chapter was so emotional, Seins reaction to what happened to the owlets, I felt so bad for her and Kuro. I'm so glad that Gumo decided to help Ori though and that brightened me up, you rock at these and I'm hoping for Black Root Burrows to come soon too, keep it up pal you're doing great!️

Wow, I'm really loving this story you did a great job. I hope you make more of these, I love Ori and the Blind Forest.

The story is great so far. I know this is from a game, but I appreciate you add certain parts and details of you're own. Keep it up!

I love that depiction of the forlorn ruins escape!

Since you're continuing this, does this mean that you're going to add exclusive content from the Definitive Edition of them game, as well as make a separate story for Ori and The Will of the Wisps?

Glad you continue this!

Well, that's downing...

So beautifully told. Keep up the work

Please continue this!

Very sweet story so far :)